for Earning The Badge3/8/2018 c8 InTheLionsDenOnDA
Of course she will take the case and Nick is rightly pissed at the wolves getting the badges, though I think it will be fun having Larry and Garry around.
The revaluation about Nick's mark at the psychotherapist office working at the ZPD was interesting. Coming clean on his actions there and making the decision between law enforcement of conning might be quite the mess as he draws this out longer.
Great to see this chapter. It was a fun read.
Of course she will take the case and Nick is rightly pissed at the wolves getting the badges, though I think it will be fun having Larry and Garry around.
The revaluation about Nick's mark at the psychotherapist office working at the ZPD was interesting. Coming clean on his actions there and making the decision between law enforcement of conning might be quite the mess as he draws this out longer.
Great to see this chapter. It was a fun read.
3/7/2018 c8 Guest
I hope they go to the Mystic Springs Oasis!
I hope they go to the Mystic Springs Oasis!
3/4/2018 c8 
3Thou Craggy Knob
A fine chapter, complete with an ending to deepen the case.
Excellent work.
3Thou Craggy KnobA fine chapter, complete with an ending to deepen the case.
Excellent work.
3/3/2018 c8 ak1ba
this is so good, you keep delivering. i love your portrayal of the sergeant, she both hilarious and scary. i cant wait to read that case.
this is so good, you keep delivering. i love your portrayal of the sergeant, she both hilarious and scary. i cant wait to read that case.
3/3/2018 c8 SJC-Caron
You still have both the humour and the political intrigue that keeps me coming back to this fanfic.
You still have both the humour and the political intrigue that keeps me coming back to this fanfic.
2/13/2018 c4 Undertheskys
Oh my gosh I laughed so hard when Nick went to see Doc again. "I am the master of my own destiny"
DOUG!?
Oh my gosh I laughed so hard when Nick went to see Doc again. "I am the master of my own destiny"
DOUG!?
2/3/2018 c7 ck
Going great so far! I actually like the shorter sections. Easier to read, and to digest in one sitting. Hope this form works for you!
Going great so far! I actually like the shorter sections. Easier to read, and to digest in one sitting. Hope this form works for you!
1/30/2018 c6 ck
Love all the movie references, and all the research you obviously do for these tales. Still could use a spell check, btw, but don't let that take away the spirit of your prose.
Love all the movie references, and all the research you obviously do for these tales. Still could use a spell check, btw, but don't let that take away the spirit of your prose.
1/29/2018 c6 FokingGuest
Got a hunch that was Rocket all along!
Got a hunch that was Rocket all along!
1/8/2018 c5 48la-perla's mermaid
I love how you referenced Poirot! You even made Nick just as smug and annoying as him when it came to present the solution to the case!
48la-perla's mermaidI love how you referenced Poirot! You even made Nick just as smug and annoying as him when it came to present the solution to the case!
1/8/2018 c7 Merecor
The chapter read just as well as all the others, which is good. The real question is; Why are you breaking them up into smaller chapters? I'm just curious. Are you doing it so that you can make quicker updates?
The chapter read just as well as all the others, which is good. The real question is; Why are you breaking them up into smaller chapters? I'm just curious. Are you doing it so that you can make quicker updates?
1/4/2018 c7 Fairlane302
While I like long chapters just fine, I think the would prefer more, shorter chapters, more frequently. It's easier to keep track of what's happening, and makes for a more manageable read. of course too short is not preferred either. 4-9k words, leaning more towards the 9k range than the 4k, seems to be about the sweet spot for me with respect to engaging and rewarding content, but still reasonable length.
While I like long chapters just fine, I think the would prefer more, shorter chapters, more frequently. It's easier to keep track of what's happening, and makes for a more manageable read. of course too short is not preferred either. 4-9k words, leaning more towards the 9k range than the 4k, seems to be about the sweet spot for me with respect to engaging and rewarding content, but still reasonable length.