for Black Luminary
18/24/2022 c69 Fmlbadatnames
These are deep waters. There's a great sense of scale, where Harry actually feels like a school boy, albeit a super rich, talented one.
Aenor has a grudge against the icw, and shredded a squad of their (supposedly) best aurors, but is recruiting Harry for his talents because she needs help.
The Blacks financial play is at hand, their private wealth rivaling the entire country.
Hermione draws everyone into further conflict with the ministry.
I want to see Harry and friends have some measure of success. It feels like there's been a lot of them struggling to stay afloat, but I'm hoping that there's a turning point soon, where we see the behind the scene stuff that Arcturus has been working on come to fruition, and Harry gets a better grasp on his weird magic stuff, and some of the more antagonistic figures face some consequences.
These are deep waters. There's a great sense of scale, where Harry actually feels like a school boy, albeit a super rich, talented one.
Aenor has a grudge against the icw, and shredded a squad of their (supposedly) best aurors, but is recruiting Harry for his talents because she needs help.
The Blacks financial play is at hand, their private wealth rivaling the entire country.
Hermione draws everyone into further conflict with the ministry.
I want to see Harry and friends have some measure of success. It feels like there's been a lot of them struggling to stay afloat, but I'm hoping that there's a turning point soon, where we see the behind the scene stuff that Arcturus has been working on come to fruition, and Harry gets a better grasp on his weird magic stuff, and some of the more antagonistic figures face some consequences.
8/24/2022 c69 Maitre Inquisiteur
That was amazing. The quality of the writing is great and the plot is amzing. Well done.
That was amazing. The quality of the writing is great and the plot is amzing. Well done.
8/24/2022 c69 nijura9
i am really really glad that this is continued. I like the ramping build up to a bigger picture alot.
i am really really glad that this is continued. I like the ramping build up to a bigger picture alot.
8/24/2022 c69 GamingFox666
Well, I enjoyed the calm before the storm. The character dynamics are all delightful. Though it does make the storm all the more straining on the heart. Thanks for the chapter.
Well, I enjoyed the calm before the storm. The character dynamics are all delightful. Though it does make the storm all the more straining on the heart. Thanks for the chapter.
8/24/2022 c69 lent10
I prefer shorter chapters like in the beginning of your story anyway, idealy with a higher post frequency.
I prefer shorter chapters like in the beginning of your story anyway, idealy with a higher post frequency.
8/19/2022 c48 Guestt
Since I haven't seen it mentioned in the comments or ANs anywhere, I just cannot keep myself from asking any longer: Just where is Tom Riddle and what is he doing?
Since I haven't seen it mentioned in the comments or ANs anywhere, I just cannot keep myself from asking any longer: Just where is Tom Riddle and what is he doing?
8/17/2022 c52 Lord Silindel
so here is where I stop reading this story. I will give you props for your grammar and dialogues. but 52 chapters in and this is dragging on and on and on, with no clear destination. Your Harry seems to be such a above average guy with no likeness. Dude is a wimp with girls, a midget for some reason (guess you are basing him on Radcliffe), have him as a prodigy on charms but average in everything else, surprisingly as he is future lord Black (Funny).
if you are going to be making a 14 year old start Hogwarts then why do they have 11 year old personalities and abilities? this is magic not regular school. now don't think from what I'm saying that I want a super op mc but this is just boring.
now the story. you are trying do hard to be edgy with your lack of plot etc, that is borderline annoying. No Ingo on Potters, No info on main Characters like was there a Voldemort? Pettigrrew? We have to guess and try to follow your minuscule hints that we think aenor is Grindelwald grand daughter or something, but what is the purpose on all of this? your antagonists are non cannon and not fleshed out. you toy around pairings and their interactions are borderline annoying especially the one sidedness of Daphne and Harry.
all in all this has or had promise but 52 chapters in and it's a drag to read hoping for something we don't even have a guarantee you are going to end it.
good luck.
so here is where I stop reading this story. I will give you props for your grammar and dialogues. but 52 chapters in and this is dragging on and on and on, with no clear destination. Your Harry seems to be such a above average guy with no likeness. Dude is a wimp with girls, a midget for some reason (guess you are basing him on Radcliffe), have him as a prodigy on charms but average in everything else, surprisingly as he is future lord Black (Funny).
if you are going to be making a 14 year old start Hogwarts then why do they have 11 year old personalities and abilities? this is magic not regular school. now don't think from what I'm saying that I want a super op mc but this is just boring.
now the story. you are trying do hard to be edgy with your lack of plot etc, that is borderline annoying. No Ingo on Potters, No info on main Characters like was there a Voldemort? Pettigrrew? We have to guess and try to follow your minuscule hints that we think aenor is Grindelwald grand daughter or something, but what is the purpose on all of this? your antagonists are non cannon and not fleshed out. you toy around pairings and their interactions are borderline annoying especially the one sidedness of Daphne and Harry.
all in all this has or had promise but 52 chapters in and it's a drag to read hoping for something we don't even have a guarantee you are going to end it.
good luck.
8/15/2022 c7 tsougrhs.59
yea sorry.. yhis 14yold harry act like a little 6 yold kid
maybe the author believes he gonna be fine when he explains the plot to the future but the story is a chore to read... no wonder a story with 600k words has so small following
yea sorry.. yhis 14yold harry act like a little 6 yold kid
maybe the author believes he gonna be fine when he explains the plot to the future but the story is a chore to read... no wonder a story with 600k words has so small following
8/15/2022 c5 tsougrhs.59
so we wanna have a more annoying Hermione calling professors all the time ...nice
so we wanna have a more annoying Hermione calling professors all the time ...nice
8/15/2022 c4 tsougrhs.59
why the fook a 14 yold harry grow up by arturus black fooking shuttering and talk like a 5yold kid?
wtf actual fook?
i tho this gonna be a good story.. shit!
why the fook a 14 yold harry grow up by arturus black fooking shuttering and talk like a 5yold kid?
wtf actual fook?
i tho this gonna be a good story.. shit!
8/15/2022 c4 tsougrhs.59
why the heck harry can not speak like a normal person with Hermione? fooking disappointed
why the heck harry can not speak like a normal person with Hermione? fooking disappointed