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8/19/2024 c72 GamingFox666
The storm came and went, but I'm still feeling quite tense. Thanks for the chapter.

Also, I like the story blurb ("The war..."). Not sure if it was always like that, but I'm noticing it now, and appreciating it.
8/19/2024 c72 Feanor-dutch
As always a delight to see an update. Quality work
8/18/2024 c72 Eating Upside Down
I’ll take the over on if this story ends in 5 years.
8/18/2024 c72 Cookiemathew
Oh, oh, oh… me is thinking its a reread time. Best character Arcturus getting some more page time!
8/18/2024 c72 Aether Elementalist
Eagerly awaiting the next chapters!
8/18/2024 c72 8tyrnfrd
Omg you're back! Another excellent chapter. I can't wait for the next one!
8/18/2024 c72 Lekka
Awesome! Fantastic chapter, you have given us a lot to discuss on discord
8/18/2024 c72 Anee-1
It had been so long I'd forgotten what even happened in this story. Glad to have you back, even if it was quite a slow chapter. Looking forward to the next one.
8/8/2024 c71 major wallace
Awesome work
6/24/2024 c71 1megacharizat
damn wow. that's one mean point to stop the story on. come on. that needs to be updated.
5/30/2024 c30 Guest
I'd love to see astoria/harry
5/29/2024 c7 9Tri-Edge
Okay, this was retarded. Harry is burning his bridges with everyone for no real reason beyond that he's too fucking stupid to use his words, as if he were a mentally deficient toddler. Is it really too hard for him to say: "hey guys, everyone is going to be looking at me funny for a bit, maybe it's best if you stay away for a while;" or, for his companions who surely should each have a brain of their own, to realize that on their own? Complete nonsense.

And what the hell is up with Harry constantly ending up bleeding from all his orifices and needing to be hospitalized? Once, whatever. Twice, okay, sure I guess. Three times, what the fuck? I'm sure this chapter won't be the end of it either.
5/29/2024 c6 Tri-Edge
Harry's... moments... and his attitude near women seems unnecessarily dramatic—to the point Id' call it melodrama.
5/18/2024 c18 Lofty breeze
harry has a serious rape victim vibe in this
4/26/2024 c19 Z0d
These Hermione interludes are so painful and pointless. The stroy is moving at a snails pace and there has been very little plot progression. Getting hard for me to read further.
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