
2/19/2017 c4 StilesCook
Please update!
Please update!
1/9/2017 c2 Guest
Formatting, blah. No flow, cant read. Get beta.
Formatting, blah. No flow, cant read. Get beta.
1/8/2017 c4 Mindaflyer
needs more...I needs more plz hurry! also just to lt you know rin chapters need to be longer to tell you the truth ive been skipping the other ones soooo... im sugesting you stick to just rin k bye! and hurry up with the chapters!
needs more...I needs more plz hurry! also just to lt you know rin chapters need to be longer to tell you the truth ive been skipping the other ones soooo... im sugesting you stick to just rin k bye! and hurry up with the chapters!
9/16/2016 c3 xXxRayquazaxXx
I love it so far, I've been looking for a good demon rin story so update soon. C:
Will he be the savior of Assiah or the ruler of Gahenna.
I love it so far, I've been looking for a good demon rin story so update soon. C:
Will he be the savior of Assiah or the ruler of Gahenna.
8/31/2016 c2 Guest
This isnt school. Can we not double space this? And dialogue should be separated from paragraphs. Please change formatting.
This isnt school. Can we not double space this? And dialogue should be separated from paragraphs. Please change formatting.