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3/26/2017 c1 62Ihsan997
OMG

That ending!

Okay. Well, this was a pleasant surprise. The assumption is often that descriptive writing would be best to tell a story, but honestly, this sort of first person reaction - what the narrator might actually be jotting down in her journal - worked so well. You left the reader with just enough info to get the picture, but left out details that cause us to hang on and wonder what exactly is happening. This was very, very well done.
9/8/2016 c1 12MelanaAdara
very good. perfectly embodies the total confusion of battle.

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