for Kage of the Squad2/17/2017 c4 Luraso
Being disrespectful to the death god is a sure fire way to get your soul taken. Funny how Naruto wanted to get respect his entire life, but is willing to disrespect someone so easily.
Being disrespectful to the death god is a sure fire way to get your soul taken. Funny how Naruto wanted to get respect his entire life, but is willing to disrespect someone so easily.
1/17/2017 c3 Devon
I love how people think they can tell you how to write your story. -_-
It's going great keep it the way you have it, it's going to be much better than whatever these other downers think
I love how people think they can tell you how to write your story. -_-
It's going great keep it the way you have it, it's going to be much better than whatever these other downers think
12/25/2016 c3 
28KuronoDono12
Interesting story so far and as for the pairing I vote Naruto x Ivy with Katana assuming a sisterly and possibly Godmother role in the event Naruto and Ivy have kids.
28KuronoDono12Interesting story so far and as for the pairing I vote Naruto x Ivy with Katana assuming a sisterly and possibly Godmother role in the event Naruto and Ivy have kids.
10/2/2016 c3 celestialfox1
please update this is a really awesome story and i would love to read more
please update this is a really awesome story and i would love to read more
9/19/2016 c3 Owen Prior
It's amazing that even though in the summary it says no harems very clearly, people are still trying to make it a pairing option
It's amazing that even though in the summary it says no harems very clearly, people are still trying to make it a pairing option
9/14/2016 c3 s.k.f.f.f
Its your story, dont let others ditact your story. Its fanfic, it doesnt have to follow canon.
Its your story, dont let others ditact your story. Its fanfic, it doesnt have to follow canon.