for Kage of the Squad9/7/2016 c2 bloodshark
Great story can't wait for the real action to happen. For the pairing Naruto with Harley or Giganta would be good. Harley and Nartuo personality go great together. How ever Naruto and Giganta would be great both would understand each other. Nartuo being jinchuuriki while Giganta was just a simple gorilla that Grodd used to create a weapon something Naruto could relate with. Also with Naruto being more cleaver and maybe out smarting Grodd could help build up their relation ship. Any way can't wait for more, keep up the good work.
Great story can't wait for the real action to happen. For the pairing Naruto with Harley or Giganta would be good. Harley and Nartuo personality go great together. How ever Naruto and Giganta would be great both would understand each other. Nartuo being jinchuuriki while Giganta was just a simple gorilla that Grodd used to create a weapon something Naruto could relate with. Also with Naruto being more cleaver and maybe out smarting Grodd could help build up their relation ship. Any way can't wait for more, keep up the good work.
9/7/2016 c2 Neo Infinity
Good chapter I knew superman was alive cause he is a main character for the league and i saw a similar death in the original animation, I still vote for poison ivy cause she can relate to him the most through nature and with his ninshu he can fix her abilities to be more controllable, being able to have children and not always kill anyone she kisses plus she is definitely one of the most powerful and beautiful marvel girls, I hope you updated soon.
Good chapter I knew superman was alive cause he is a main character for the league and i saw a similar death in the original animation, I still vote for poison ivy cause she can relate to him the most through nature and with his ninshu he can fix her abilities to be more controllable, being able to have children and not always kill anyone she kisses plus she is definitely one of the most powerful and beautiful marvel girls, I hope you updated soon.
9/7/2016 c2 Kestes
I couldnt care less who you pair him up with. Long as they're 16. I'm glad I decided (after our talks) to keep an eye on this story. You done good. Really good! I look forward to seeing more from you
Best regards,
Kes
I couldnt care less who you pair him up with. Long as they're 16. I'm glad I decided (after our talks) to keep an eye on this story. You done good. Really good! I look forward to seeing more from you
Best regards,
Kes
9/7/2016 c2 SupergodzillaSailorCosmos
It now goes last.
Now you build a connection to Batman v Superman.
already strained Bin when Superman & Batman hit Naruto.
Superman is supposed to happen in the upcoming film Justice League, so he is reborn, but your idea I like better.
But who is the attacker?
Please write on quickly.
Sincerely SupergodzillaSailorCosmos
It now goes last.
Now you build a connection to Batman v Superman.
already strained Bin when Superman & Batman hit Naruto.
Superman is supposed to happen in the upcoming film Justice League, so he is reborn, but your idea I like better.
But who is the attacker?
Please write on quickly.
Sincerely SupergodzillaSailorCosmos
9/7/2016 c2 eniox27
Good stuff. I know didly squat about the dc time line right now. Hmm while I like ivy I feel a change is needed so katana death or dent would've be my choices in that order
Good stuff. I know didly squat about the dc time line right now. Hmm while I like ivy I feel a change is needed so katana death or dent would've be my choices in that order
9/7/2016 c2 Guest
Ok well naruto isnt the second coming of the sage of six paths! Why that is in this fanfic is because even thou he is smarter he is not wise enough to be given the title and not mature enough, a shinobi SHOULD know how to use there jutsu and techneques properly so it doesnt backfire and i see absolutely no reson at all why he is nerfing hisself! it's comeplete bull on how people throw a OP naruto into this then they nerf him straight away! it feels that there was no thought about his powers and anything before you started so you nefed him, Also please if your going to give naruto More jutsu and chakra based techniques dont give him a cliche jutsu not of his own making, for example, thr technique for forming the rasengan could be used in a fighting style or blasts of pressurized swriling chakra around his fist or an unstable exploding rasengan what you could throw, please this about. All together thou i like it
Ok well naruto isnt the second coming of the sage of six paths! Why that is in this fanfic is because even thou he is smarter he is not wise enough to be given the title and not mature enough, a shinobi SHOULD know how to use there jutsu and techneques properly so it doesnt backfire and i see absolutely no reson at all why he is nerfing hisself! it's comeplete bull on how people throw a OP naruto into this then they nerf him straight away! it feels that there was no thought about his powers and anything before you started so you nefed him, Also please if your going to give naruto More jutsu and chakra based techniques dont give him a cliche jutsu not of his own making, for example, thr technique for forming the rasengan could be used in a fighting style or blasts of pressurized swriling chakra around his fist or an unstable exploding rasengan what you could throw, please this about. All together thou i like it
9/7/2016 c2 Guest
Pair naruto with chesire from young justice
Pair naruto with chesire from young justice
9/7/2016 c2 DarkthShadow
I think people only want Killer Frost because of the animated Suicide Squad movie
I think people only want Killer Frost because of the animated Suicide Squad movie
9/7/2016 c2 za worlda
I'll be honest most people want killer frost cause of her new appearance and the thing about harems is that it just works well with Naruto and if you do decide to use power girl don't have her know about Naruto I have read three total that have it like that it just doesn't work well the only people I currently support in a relationship with Naruto is Harley Quinn don't ask sometimes this works killer frost, poison ivy,super girl, power girl, Barbara, raven and cat-woman although I have only seen the last one done once and I think that was abandoned or taken down
I'll be honest most people want killer frost cause of her new appearance and the thing about harems is that it just works well with Naruto and if you do decide to use power girl don't have her know about Naruto I have read three total that have it like that it just doesn't work well the only people I currently support in a relationship with Naruto is Harley Quinn don't ask sometimes this works killer frost, poison ivy,super girl, power girl, Barbara, raven and cat-woman although I have only seen the last one done once and I think that was abandoned or taken down
9/7/2016 c2 Guest
Epic update, please update again soon.
Epic update, please update again soon.
9/4/2016 c1 SupergodzillaSailorCosmos
Cool story.
Naruto befriends certainly with Katana, Croc and Co.
And who knows, maybe to Katana and Naruto come closer.
You have not said yes, that's Naruto with Hinata together.
I'm curious on the closest Chapter.
Please write on quickly.
Sincerely SupergodzillaSailorCosmos
Cool story.
Naruto befriends certainly with Katana, Croc and Co.
And who knows, maybe to Katana and Naruto come closer.
You have not said yes, that's Naruto with Hinata together.
I'm curious on the closest Chapter.
Please write on quickly.
Sincerely SupergodzillaSailorCosmos
9/3/2016 c1 DBlade59
so far this seem like it could be a good story, just a guess on who the 'badass' is Deathstroke, since Naruto was the Hokage I'm going to say that at least 5-10 years have passed since the 4th war so have Naruto have a decently large arsenal of jutsu for each element and category of jutsu, agree with the not having him be god-like but do still have him be way strong and hard to beat (like A-class hero/villain required), don't let Naruto be too much of a 'good' hero type have him be more a dark or anti-hero type
As for who to pair Naruto with here are the top 5 that made sense to me at the time (not in any order) 1) Pamela Isley (Naruto could be immune to her toxins give some time, they both likely prefer nature over that of a city, he's a sage and incomplete jinchūriki to the Juubi (a god tree) while she is part nature, she is sometime a lover of Harley so the two might cross paths and Harley could 'join' them once in a while) 2) Amanda Waller from the new 52 (she is better than to one from the movie, she might be able to relate to Naruto, she probably could teach Naruto a thing or two, she logically would/could be able to help Naruto form/build a new life in the DC world) 3) Paula Nguyen from Earth-16 (more of a neutral choice, she is an ex-mercenary, she might be able to understand Naruto and what he does and why, depending on her and Naruto ages they could make a good couple and raise her daughter(s) together (also Artemis looks a little like Naruto)) 4) Duela Dent from Earth-3 (weird/crazy choice, both of them are from different worlds, both more than likely have some psychological scars and might be able to help heal the other's, both seem like they would fall more in to the gray between good and bad) 5) Death [the Endless member] (wild card choice, likeable character, Naruto could be made into an exception to the rules and be able to be in a relationship with her due to the connection his connection to the Shinigami (Uzumaki clan had some kind of connection, the Shinigami could of done the sealing or at least some of it's energy could of been in the seal/used, the fact that half of Kurama was in the Shinigami's stomach for 15/16 years, and Naruto did come back from death at least twice (Blood Prison and extraction of Kurama)), the energy from the tailed-beasts/Sage's energy/and power taken from Sasuke could be made to slowly turn Naruto into the new Juubi or semi-immortal (ageless and extremely hard to kill)as the power grows while fused with his own, she might even be able to enhance or increase his powers/abilities, by concept they can be merciful or merciless depending on the situation)
so far this seem like it could be a good story, just a guess on who the 'badass' is Deathstroke, since Naruto was the Hokage I'm going to say that at least 5-10 years have passed since the 4th war so have Naruto have a decently large arsenal of jutsu for each element and category of jutsu, agree with the not having him be god-like but do still have him be way strong and hard to beat (like A-class hero/villain required), don't let Naruto be too much of a 'good' hero type have him be more a dark or anti-hero type
As for who to pair Naruto with here are the top 5 that made sense to me at the time (not in any order) 1) Pamela Isley (Naruto could be immune to her toxins give some time, they both likely prefer nature over that of a city, he's a sage and incomplete jinchūriki to the Juubi (a god tree) while she is part nature, she is sometime a lover of Harley so the two might cross paths and Harley could 'join' them once in a while) 2) Amanda Waller from the new 52 (she is better than to one from the movie, she might be able to relate to Naruto, she probably could teach Naruto a thing or two, she logically would/could be able to help Naruto form/build a new life in the DC world) 3) Paula Nguyen from Earth-16 (more of a neutral choice, she is an ex-mercenary, she might be able to understand Naruto and what he does and why, depending on her and Naruto ages they could make a good couple and raise her daughter(s) together (also Artemis looks a little like Naruto)) 4) Duela Dent from Earth-3 (weird/crazy choice, both of them are from different worlds, both more than likely have some psychological scars and might be able to help heal the other's, both seem like they would fall more in to the gray between good and bad) 5) Death [the Endless member] (wild card choice, likeable character, Naruto could be made into an exception to the rules and be able to be in a relationship with her due to the connection his connection to the Shinigami (Uzumaki clan had some kind of connection, the Shinigami could of done the sealing or at least some of it's energy could of been in the seal/used, the fact that half of Kurama was in the Shinigami's stomach for 15/16 years, and Naruto did come back from death at least twice (Blood Prison and extraction of Kurama)), the energy from the tailed-beasts/Sage's energy/and power taken from Sasuke could be made to slowly turn Naruto into the new Juubi or semi-immortal (ageless and extremely hard to kill)as the power grows while fused with his own, she might even be able to enhance or increase his powers/abilities, by concept they can be merciful or merciless depending on the situation)
9/2/2016 c1 Kestes
I dont see how this version of Naruto is more "mature" when he practically divulged the history of his world.. Sorry. No sense of responsibility to his people. Nothing.
Nah. Im done. I've too many stories like this.
Good luck with your fic.
Best regards,
Kes
I dont see how this version of Naruto is more "mature" when he practically divulged the history of his world.. Sorry. No sense of responsibility to his people. Nothing.
Nah. Im done. I've too many stories like this.
Good luck with your fic.
Best regards,
Kes