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1/26/2019 c1 Imperial Gilgamesh
i don't understand why everyone in this crossover section is a big devil cock sucking bitch I mean he has to be a devil which give him almost next to no ghosts greater than shinigami I mean shinigami is far far FAR BETTER THEN DEVIL. at least they don't have any kind of weaknesses unlike devil.
12/18/2018 c5 Tilty.bbb
This was a fantastic read well done
12/15/2017 c5 Guest
I really enjoyed this keep up the good work
11/29/2017 c5 Guest
Not gonna lie the plot to the story sounds great but the spelling is off in all chapters I'm not saying you should scrap the story, just sort out the spelling and fix the plot a little that's all but so far this could become amazing.
3/7/2017 c5 Arraia
Perfect and update soon please
1/17/2017 c1 Guest
Dear Writer,

To put it lightly, this story is shit, if you can call it a story. The grammar falls apart so fast, it looks like it was never together in the first place. The plot is also terrible if you can call it a plot. Here's a tip: with a character in a story, don't make them too OP at the start, so that they're actually challenged. In addition, you gave Ichigo EVERY SINGLE FUCKING POWER. I mean back the fuck off. Like seriously, we thought being a Quincy-Shinigami-Hollow-Human was bad enough. You literally just said, I'm going to make Ichigo the God of Everything and give him a dark personality, with the backstory/explanation being he got hit by a cero. All power must come with explanation, you cant just give your characters free everything. It also helps to know grammar, spelling and other linguistics when writing a story.

With hope for improvement,

A Reader
11/22/2016 c1 ulsha
Toxic to read. Nothing but a gary stu fan service trying to be a soft core porn story. Lay off the hentai for a while kid.
10/4/2016 c4 1Tachibana Kabuki
OMG. That was hilarious I'm looking forward for the next chapter
10/3/2016 c1 Tachibana Kabuki
OK. I'm excited for the next chapter
9/19/2016 c1 Guest
this is cancer
9/17/2016 c4 Guest
Please continue writing hakim
9/16/2016 c4 Guest
Ignore the previous review but as i said great story so far please tell me when is the next chapter going to be out?
9/16/2016 c1 Guest
Great story so far hakim please tell me when the next chapter is going to be out?
9/17/2016 c2 3Pyrofoxxxx
Seriously beginning to want to kill myself...
9/14/2016 c1 Guest
Work on your fucking english dude.

This was by "Red Reaper Of Murder" originally. So did you get his permission to do this?
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