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12/11/2016 c1 Guest
Please write a new chapter it's so good!
10/29/2016 c1 2TDF4638
I found it a bit hard to track who was saying what in the conversations. It seems to jump around a bit too quickly. I'd have appreciated it if there'd been a bit more time to introduce the characters rather than jumping straight into the action.

I look forward to seeing what happens next. :)

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