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4/4 c8 redmen6blight
I have to disagree with you on Dumbledore he is a meddling incompetent old fool and should never be allowed anywhere near I agree with most that it isn't so much the phrophecy he is into no its the greater good nonsense he am curious does Harry have a pairing in mind I am okay with anyone as long as its not Yaoi seriously far to much of that in the Harry Potter fandom as is.
6/12/2020 c2 11Dark-Prince-of-Clowns
This scentence is a bit confusing...

"Vader did consider all the Jedi involved to be idealistic weaklings and cowards even Anakin Skywalker,"

Did he mean even HIM back when HE was still Anakin?
I mean... Darth Vader IS Anakin Skywalker.

It was just confusing. Lol

But I can totally see the Emperor paint the Jedi as Evil. Both sides are kinda assholes. The Sith is just less hypocritical about it. Palpatine not included.

I mean... I don't remember his personal belifs, but I know a few of them is beyond tragic by Sith standards. (Weakening the whole group by choosing apprentices that he won't or that can't grow stronger than him? Bane and the old Sith Lords are rolling in their graves.)

Anyway. I like the story thus far. And I hope Harry prove stronger than Vader in the end.
3/4/2020 c6 ClaireR89
I kinda feel that being Mara’s brother is pointless at this point. She was barely around in general and now he’s left the empire and obviously hasn’t thought/doesn’t care about her
3/4/2020 c5 ClaireR89
Since when did Sith use healing? Last I knew dark side couldn’t do that. But I could be mistaken
3/4/2020 c2 ClaireR89
Needs serious editing
11/28/2019 c6 Konnir
You can't stop the blade of a lightsaber with a hand. There are very few things that can stop a lightsaber. Flesh is not one of those things
11/13/2019 c23 Axccel
Fay was active during the New Sith Wars. She’s one or more centuries older than Yoda.
1/6/2019 c23 18Ironshot
Great story so far, but I thought you said Hogwarts would get involved at some point? Looking forward to the next chapter.
10/5/2018 c1 7jh831
or become a grey force user...almost nobody has done those stories, it either, he is dark, then turns light or vice versa
6/20/2018 c1 2Blake Tourdner
to Face Yourself Red Saber Crystal are Force Crystal that were Bled READ THE BOOKS AND COMICS even googling will tell you this
6/11/2018 c23 Thepankekesman
Plaz continue this it was just starting to get good.
12/20/2017 c8 Face Yourself
'Meditate on the crystal for it to gain color?' That's... blatantly wrong, why would you even include something so absurdly untrue while also being fairly inconsequential? I doubt it's relevant to the story, so seriously, why? The color of a lightsaber is determined by the crystal's mineral composition and cut angles, there's no meditation involved. The only reason Sith lightsabers are often red is because that's how synthetically made crystals usually turn out, since they've historically had less access to naturally formed crystals.
12/20/2017 c7 Face Yourself
Was wondering why there wasn't more mention of Mara before now, since he left.
The whole attempt on the Emperor and such felt very, very rushed, could have done with a couple more chapters leading up to that, as well as showing more time with Mara.
So far this doesn't feel at all like a Star Wars / HP crossover fic. It feels like a Star Wars fic with an OC, because "Hunter" has yet to do or show anything remotely Harry-esque.
12/20/2017 c3 Face Yourself
Wait, now you're making Mara a year older than Luke, rather than (canon age of) a year younger? Well... okay I guess, whatever. Doesn't really affect much of anything...
12/20/2017 c1 Face Yourself
3 years old is the upper end of toddler. 4 years old is definitively outside 'toddler' range, and into 'child.'
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