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10/20/2016 c3 2Penny is wise
Awesome chapter.
10/20/2016 c3 Vukk

The last section was 1,000% out of no where. He went from Loyal to traitor with no reason. That needs fixed as it killed the story.
10/20/2016 c3 god of all
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
9/12/2016 c2 Penny is wise
Awesome chapter.
9/12/2016 c2 Vukk
What you said is why I think Anakin Skywalkers's part was so well done. He lived the life he did, the way he did, because of growing up as a slave, then being expected to have no emotions. For the part he played, the actor did a wonderful job. The problem was Lucas and the script. People think the actor did a bad job, when he did what the script and director wanted him to.
9/12/2016 c2 panther73110
Interesting story, like what you written so far and was wondering if the wizarding world will play a part of this story and if James and Lily are still dead?
9/12/2016 c2 11stars90
Hmmm. I'm really curious to see what deepens Hunter's doubts
9/12/2016 c2 Guest
9/9/2016 c1 2Penny is wise
Awesome first chapter.
9/5/2016 c1 Artur Hawkwing1
You have an interesting story here. liking forward to seeing where you're going to take it.
9/5/2016 c1 11stars90
Nice work. I'm really curious to see what was blocking Harry from the force and his aggression.
9/4/2016 c1 CurtFirefly
Cool! I like this concept!
9/4/2016 c1 Guest
Not a bad first chapter
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