for A Fresh Start2/23 c2 Guest
Ash is obviously not that older he should be 15
Ash is obviously not that older he should be 15
5/29/2022 c10 luvpokemon
plleeaassee [continue] this story soon!
plleeaassee [continue] this story soon!
10/27/2021 c1 
14Nighlocktheawesome00
Silly Delia. No matter what career Ash takes, there will always be those who try to hurt him. There's always gonna be another Team Rocket, another Team Aqua/Magma, another Team Galactic, another Team Plasma, another Team Flare, hell, even another Hunter J for that matter. You can't want nothing to happen to him. Because then nothing would ever happen to him.
14Nighlocktheawesome00Silly Delia. No matter what career Ash takes, there will always be those who try to hurt him. There's always gonna be another Team Rocket, another Team Aqua/Magma, another Team Galactic, another Team Plasma, another Team Flare, hell, even another Hunter J for that matter. You can't want nothing to happen to him. Because then nothing would ever happen to him.
10/14/2020 c5 Guest
i've read your fic before, didn't realize that the story ash tells may is a twilight reference!
i've read your fic before, didn't realize that the story ash tells may is a twilight reference!
6/9/2020 c9 Guest
AND finish (a fresh start) I WOULD LIKE TO KNOW THE END TO IT, SINCE IT SEEMS LIKE YOUR ALMOST DONE WITH IT! PLEASE AND THANK YOU!
AND finish (a fresh start) I WOULD LIKE TO KNOW THE END TO IT, SINCE IT SEEMS LIKE YOUR ALMOST DONE WITH IT! PLEASE AND THANK YOU!
7/27/2019 c1 kat
can U please try to finish (a fresh start) I WOULD LIKE TO KNOW THE END! PLEASE AND THANK YOU!
can U please try to finish (a fresh start) I WOULD LIKE TO KNOW THE END! PLEASE AND THANK YOU!
5/14/2019 c10 Guest
Where is the update don't hold out on us.
Where is the update don't hold out on us.
10/9/2018 c8 J-man12
I also get frustrated really easily so I hate it when people are rude to me. Aka when my sister who is a year and a half younger than me calls me disgusting,the worst brother in the world,and a disgrace to humanity constantly. ARCEUS HELP ME PLEASE!
I also get frustrated really easily so I hate it when people are rude to me. Aka when my sister who is a year and a half younger than me calls me disgusting,the worst brother in the world,and a disgrace to humanity constantly. ARCEUS HELP ME PLEASE!
10/9/2018 c7 J-man12
Most of Ash's rivals I hate but Drew and the other cocky ones are the worst aka Trip and drew especially. I used to hate Gary,but he isn't snarky now at least. Seriously though what kind of phrase is smell ya later it sounds so wrong!
Most of Ash's rivals I hate but Drew and the other cocky ones are the worst aka Trip and drew especially. I used to hate Gary,but he isn't snarky now at least. Seriously though what kind of phrase is smell ya later it sounds so wrong!
10/9/2018 c5 J-man12
I really like this story so far and May is my favorite of Ash's female companions,also if May and Ah's kid called Pikachu uncle I would die. XD P.S after I finish reading this story I will definitely read some of your other stories.
I really like this story so far and May is my favorite of Ash's female companions,also if May and Ah's kid called Pikachu uncle I would die. XD P.S after I finish reading this story I will definitely read some of your other stories.