for A Mothers Love10/23/2024 c1 Markus
I ain't a pervert,but i would say my only problem with this is that delia is actually female so she can't cum.
I ain't a pervert,but i would say my only problem with this is that delia is actually female so she can't cum.
8/3/2021 c1 Guest
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1/2/2021 c3 
6brasheril-holmestalentsmaster
I've really liked the story until now.
The smut is superb.
The starting scene is kinda cliche, but you gave it a nice twist to fit a more romantic setting. I approve.
The interactions are wholesome and heartwarming, which I personally love.
Your descriptions are very good, though I would recommend you to never specify either breasts cupsize or penis size, it's better to let the readers fill in details like that.
If you really want/need to describe something like that, use adjectives that are more vague/subjective, like big, huge, giant, massive, or things like that.
Cynthia appearing was unexpected, but I hope she can also find her happy ending as I really like her character.
Grammar, ortography and punctuation are topnotch. Structurization of the text is very good.
I hope I helped with constructive criticism.
Over and out.
PS: I'm going to post this on AO3 in an anthology with similar stories. All credit, of course, will be given to you. I'm posting it there, cause ffnet once in a while purges a lot of content and I feel that yours might fit their criteria.
6brasheril-holmestalentsmasterI've really liked the story until now.
The smut is superb.
The starting scene is kinda cliche, but you gave it a nice twist to fit a more romantic setting. I approve.
The interactions are wholesome and heartwarming, which I personally love.
Your descriptions are very good, though I would recommend you to never specify either breasts cupsize or penis size, it's better to let the readers fill in details like that.
If you really want/need to describe something like that, use adjectives that are more vague/subjective, like big, huge, giant, massive, or things like that.
Cynthia appearing was unexpected, but I hope she can also find her happy ending as I really like her character.
Grammar, ortography and punctuation are topnotch. Structurization of the text is very good.
I hope I helped with constructive criticism.
Over and out.
PS: I'm going to post this on AO3 in an anthology with similar stories. All credit, of course, will be given to you. I'm posting it there, cause ffnet once in a while purges a lot of content and I feel that yours might fit their criteria.
12/8/2020 c1 AndyFroemel
What’s crazy is parent child incest is legal in New Jersey, if the child is of age
What’s crazy is parent child incest is legal in New Jersey, if the child is of age
10/9/2020 c1 Jay
XD “I’m PROUD to be a pervert “ same here same here
XD “I’m PROUD to be a pervert “ same here same here
4/28/2020 c1 Raja
Please add more and more chapters of delia ducking with ash and ash ducking with all mothers and all female professors of all regions
Please add more and more chapters of delia ducking with ash and ash ducking with all mothers and all female professors of all regions
6/22/2019 c3 Alex
I hope you update soon
I hope you update soon
5/17/2019 c3 ItsTheTerra
More please! I like it a lot!
More please! I like it a lot!
3/8/2018 c3 human bean
''OK, I won't hate you but I still feel bad about the slow down and I need to get this off my chest.''
*I move away from the mic to breathe in*
*take a deep breath*
''NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!''
*calms down*
''Ah that felt better''
''OK, I won't hate you but I still feel bad about the slow down and I need to get this off my chest.''
*I move away from the mic to breathe in*
*take a deep breath*
''NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!''
*calms down*
''Ah that felt better''
10/9/2017 c1 Robert Hand
Women needs to be pregnant after 3 months to produce milk.
Women needs to be pregnant after 3 months to produce milk.
8/5/2017 c2 9ThiefCrusher750
This is a nice fanfic. There are far too few Ash and Delia fics. Personally i think they really have fallen for eachother along with some others though the creators won't allow it in the show. Anyway keep up the good work.
9ThiefCrusher750This is a nice fanfic. There are far too few Ash and Delia fics. Personally i think they really have fallen for eachother along with some others though the creators won't allow it in the show. Anyway keep up the good work.
6/11/2017 c2 Sakurahater1982
nice start. hope all is well at school and so. i also hope the story is not dead. if you want to be on the save side use Archive O3 or AFF.
till then
nice start. hope all is well at school and so. i also hope the story is not dead. if you want to be on the save side use Archive O3 or AFF.
till then