for A Mothers Love3/25/2017 c2 naruto
great chapter keep it up
great chapter keep it up
2/12/2017 c3 Guest
its ok, a good story is worth waiting for
its ok, a good story is worth waiting for
12/4/2016 c2 Freakstah
I'll stay here to hear/read( you know what I mean ) gonna say for the next chapter. and I don't care who do you pick to be with Ash, it's up to you.
I'll stay here to hear/read( you know what I mean ) gonna say for the next chapter. and I don't care who do you pick to be with Ash, it's up to you.
11/28/2016 c1 Guest
I have a couple a girls that would be for the harem in worlds greatest master fanfic one of them being miette because she had some sort of romantic interest in ash especially she was able to do some of the things that Serena couldn't do like asking ash being her dance partner holding his hand dancing with him (even tho ash didn't know how to dance) getting ashs attention and I noticed during some episodes that miette was trying to win ashs heart after their first time meeting and finally there's lyra like miette she to developed a crush on ash she was even trying to get dawn hooked up with Corry just so she could end up trying to be Ash's girlfriend unlike iris she dose like ash in a romantic way but couldn't bring herself to do it because of the way she saw how ash and dawn interact with each other so she thought they were more ment for each other and the other reason I think these two should be in the hearm because miette and Lyra do not get very much attention with ash and I don't not even once they were ever put in a hearm with ash so I think they should have a chance to be put in the spotlight with him and get some attention which hasn't happened to them in a long time
I have a couple a girls that would be for the harem in worlds greatest master fanfic one of them being miette because she had some sort of romantic interest in ash especially she was able to do some of the things that Serena couldn't do like asking ash being her dance partner holding his hand dancing with him (even tho ash didn't know how to dance) getting ashs attention and I noticed during some episodes that miette was trying to win ashs heart after their first time meeting and finally there's lyra like miette she to developed a crush on ash she was even trying to get dawn hooked up with Corry just so she could end up trying to be Ash's girlfriend unlike iris she dose like ash in a romantic way but couldn't bring herself to do it because of the way she saw how ash and dawn interact with each other so she thought they were more ment for each other and the other reason I think these two should be in the hearm because miette and Lyra do not get very much attention with ash and I don't not even once they were ever put in a hearm with ash so I think they should have a chance to be put in the spotlight with him and get some attention which hasn't happened to them in a long time
11/26/2016 c1 Okami no Shinigami
It may be smut but it's well written and definitely boner inducingly kinky. I'm a perv to anyone who ever got horny is so better and honest and proud pervert that a closeted, sad, lonely, lying introvert. As Jayria said I'm not a pervert! I'M A SUPER PERVERT! Ja Ne. :)
It may be smut but it's well written and definitely boner inducingly kinky. I'm a perv to anyone who ever got horny is so better and honest and proud pervert that a closeted, sad, lonely, lying introvert. As Jayria said I'm not a pervert! I'M A SUPER PERVERT! Ja Ne. :)
10/11/2016 c1 
14Crystal Grenadier
I would love to see more chapters to this fic. It's hard finding a good Ash x Delia incest fic. The only thing harder to find is a good ash x Female pokemon fic. And i mean a good one where they aren't anthro.
14Crystal GrenadierI would love to see more chapters to this fic. It's hard finding a good Ash x Delia incest fic. The only thing harder to find is a good ash x Female pokemon fic. And i mean a good one where they aren't anthro.
10/4/2016 c1 G. Login
So that is why they are moving to Alola. Because no one there knows them they could pass for husband and wife. It seems in the pokemon universe 10 years old is a legal adult. Why else would care kids are running around with no supervision.
So that is why they are moving to Alola. Because no one there knows them they could pass for husband and wife. It seems in the pokemon universe 10 years old is a legal adult. Why else would care kids are running around with no supervision.
9/25/2016 c1 Guest
Please do i always find the taboo a turn on idk why i just do
Please do i always find the taboo a turn on idk why i just do
9/19/2016 c1 Robert77833
Would like to see more! I think it'd be kinkier if he keeps calling her Mom.
Would like to see more! I think it'd be kinkier if he keeps calling her Mom.