for Worlds Greatest Master!4/1/2020 c3 
2Scott Blake
Please update! This is amazing. And it breaks my heart that i can’t read a chapter with aria and serena and dawn
2Scott BlakePlease update! This is amazing. And it breaks my heart that i can’t read a chapter with aria and serena and dawn
8/8/2019 c3 6thunderofdeath97
hmm i think leaf, yellow, elesa, daisy oak, giselle, karen, skyla, lorelei or karen would have been great additions but oh well nice fic and its off to a greater start
6thunderofdeath97hmm i think leaf, yellow, elesa, daisy oak, giselle, karen, skyla, lorelei or karen would have been great additions but oh well nice fic and its off to a greater start
6/9/2019 c1 nick
Here are my questions, concerning this fanfic. 1. Any idea on what locations are used for this fanfic? 2. Could you be specific on when the fanfic takes place? 3. I saw the ages for some individuals in the first chapter. But how old is anyone else that's in the fanfic? 4. What Pokémon are owned by the main anime characters in this fanfic? 5. How long have they owned those Pokémon for, prior to the fanfic? 6. By the way, how did they get those Pokémon? 7. Which of Ash's friends betrayed him? 8. Why would they burn down his house, killing his mother in the process? 9. What caused them to do so? Maybe they were influenced by something sinister. 10. Why was it that Ash's other friends didn't betray him? Be sure to respond to this.
Here are my questions, concerning this fanfic. 1. Any idea on what locations are used for this fanfic? 2. Could you be specific on when the fanfic takes place? 3. I saw the ages for some individuals in the first chapter. But how old is anyone else that's in the fanfic? 4. What Pokémon are owned by the main anime characters in this fanfic? 5. How long have they owned those Pokémon for, prior to the fanfic? 6. By the way, how did they get those Pokémon? 7. Which of Ash's friends betrayed him? 8. Why would they burn down his house, killing his mother in the process? 9. What caused them to do so? Maybe they were influenced by something sinister. 10. Why was it that Ash's other friends didn't betray him? Be sure to respond to this.
10/7/2018 c3 Guest
Please have the next chapter soon
Please have the next chapter soon
10/7/2018 c2 akeiser45
does that 40 inch plasma screen TV have Netflix? if not then it needs to be replaced with a 70 inch plasma screen TV... with Netflix.
does that 40 inch plasma screen TV have Netflix? if not then it needs to be replaced with a 70 inch plasma screen TV... with Netflix.
8/8/2018 c2 blank-name33333
dude...
WHAT THE HELL IS ASH NOW? BROCK?! i really am worried about Ash. i may not have a companion but i know thanks to secondry school which is hell, girls can be vicious. they can be nice. lets hop they sty nice.
dude...
WHAT THE HELL IS ASH NOW? BROCK?! i really am worried about Ash. i may not have a companion but i know thanks to secondry school which is hell, girls can be vicious. they can be nice. lets hop they sty nice.