for United as One8/8/2023 c3 Gabe Cheairs
Awesome! Pls make more!
Awesome! Pls make more!
9/18/2016 c2 
8Black Arcane101
Hi! Your story is looking pretty good so far. Just a quick heads up.
To make it a bit better for the readers, changing the number from symbol to word makes it a lot clearer and cleaner. It just seems funny when some one uses the symbol instead of the word.
Overall, I'm curious to see what happens with the group. Keep it up and thank you! :D
8Black Arcane101Hi! Your story is looking pretty good so far. Just a quick heads up.
To make it a bit better for the readers, changing the number from symbol to word makes it a lot clearer and cleaner. It just seems funny when some one uses the symbol instead of the word.
Overall, I'm curious to see what happens with the group. Keep it up and thank you! :D
9/17/2016 c2 3firewaterwarriorKats
Hi! I think your story's pretty interesting, however, I noticed you called Cream and Silver the air duo, when in the beginning, you said their element was earth. It could be a mistake, but this early into the story, it could be quite confusing for the reader. Well, I'm hooked and can't wait for the next chapter!
3firewaterwarriorKatsHi! I think your story's pretty interesting, however, I noticed you called Cream and Silver the air duo, when in the beginning, you said their element was earth. It could be a mistake, but this early into the story, it could be quite confusing for the reader. Well, I'm hooked and can't wait for the next chapter!
9/10/2016 c1 Guest
Next! Next! Next!
First chapter nice work!
Btw don't you think Sonic hates water?
Keep up good work ;)
Next! Next! Next!
First chapter nice work!
Btw don't you think Sonic hates water?
Keep up good work ;)