for Shinji Ikari, The Leviathan's Curse9/1/2022 c1 
1ExodiaGeass8910
I think it would be an interesting way for Serafall or any love interests for Shinji to be able to see the totality of the Eva Angel War and Shijis part in it. I can see a lot of dummies dying horrible deaths as Serafall makes them look like Gendo and Sirzechs getting spooked when he animates them and Serafall goes SAVAGE MAMA BEAR on them because she learns of his part in Shinji’s pain and certainty that he is someone unlovable… Gendo Ikarithe Ultimate winner of the Worst Sperm Donor in the Universe Award!
1ExodiaGeass8910I think it would be an interesting way for Serafall or any love interests for Shinji to be able to see the totality of the Eva Angel War and Shijis part in it. I can see a lot of dummies dying horrible deaths as Serafall makes them look like Gendo and Sirzechs getting spooked when he animates them and Serafall goes SAVAGE MAMA BEAR on them because she learns of his part in Shinji’s pain and certainty that he is someone unlovable… Gendo Ikarithe Ultimate winner of the Worst Sperm Donor in the Universe Award!
5/5/2022 c1 E
I do like this premise quite a bit.
My only note is that the spelling Maoh seems odd, I've always seen it spelled Maou in romanji... not that it's really an actual language or anything.
Otherwise, really cool start.
I await more, as always.
I do like this premise quite a bit.
My only note is that the spelling Maoh seems odd, I've always seen it spelled Maou in romanji... not that it's really an actual language or anything.
Otherwise, really cool start.
I await more, as always.
8/7/2021 c1 Guestinator
1) Bitch mom, no reason given.
2) He will probably forgive her, cause stupid bitch genes bred true.
3) One plot device after another to have Sera meet him, befriend him, mind rape him, him meeting a Fallen...
4) Trying to hide who the mother is for future 'surprise', however as you never continued this earns a negative 20.
1) Bitch mom, no reason given.
2) He will probably forgive her, cause stupid bitch genes bred true.
3) One plot device after another to have Sera meet him, befriend him, mind rape him, him meeting a Fallen...
4) Trying to hide who the mother is for future 'surprise', however as you never continued this earns a negative 20.
2/11/2021 c1 Yesman
It is rare to see a fanfiction that has potential, especially with Evangelion. It's a shame you stopped writing this. :(
It is rare to see a fanfiction that has potential, especially with Evangelion. It's a shame you stopped writing this. :(
11/9/2020 c1 Feng lily
please update soon Your fanfic is amazing
please update soon Your fanfic is amazing
9/5/2020 c1 2V01dSw0rd
Big White WolfDog... Okami Amaterasu? (Or at the very least, Okami Shiranui)
“While you watched Leviathan-Sanmaybe add a comma, if Shinji is addressing Serafall?
2V01dSw0rdBig White WolfDog... Okami Amaterasu? (Or at the very least, Okami Shiranui)
“While you watched Leviathan-Sanmaybe add a comma, if Shinji is addressing Serafall?
8/20/2020 c1 Lord Meh-Meh
when you will continue this fanfic, we really want to read the rest
when you will continue this fanfic, we really want to read the rest