for Gohan's Adventure In Konaha5/27/2018 c4 TheSennin156
Welp, this certainly made me feel proud of myself and embarrassed. For the people who don't know this used to be my account and I indeed wrote this story to my embarrassment I wrote this when I was thirteen and English isn't my main language. This definitely showed me that I have improved with writing and in English as a language. I suppose I can make a rewrite of it that I can promise to be much better than this thing.
Welp, this certainly made me feel proud of myself and embarrassed. For the people who don't know this used to be my account and I indeed wrote this story to my embarrassment I wrote this when I was thirteen and English isn't my main language. This definitely showed me that I have improved with writing and in English as a language. I suppose I can make a rewrite of it that I can promise to be much better than this thing.
12/31/2017 c1 Guest
Wait a sec so Gohan and Videl are not married nor dating in this
Wait a sec so Gohan and Videl are not married nor dating in this
12/22/2017 c1 
1joannanance
confusing to follow not being able to tell what's being said or what's happening around them but good so far.
1joannananceconfusing to follow not being able to tell what's being said or what's happening around them but good so far.
12/28/2016 c4 Jvrsa
Don't you how to use punctuations?! And there are lots of spelling mistake but your fiction is rather intresting but uncomplete.
Don't you how to use punctuations?! And there are lots of spelling mistake but your fiction is rather intresting but uncomplete.
9/17/2016 c4 AnimefanZX
Gohan x Hinata plz!
Gohan x Hinata plz!
9/17/2016 c1 Guest
Please stop deleting Reviews.. That is childish and petty.
Please stop deleting Reviews.. That is childish and petty.
9/17/2016 c4 Guest
Bad grammer.. And No difference in plot..
Someone as powerful as Gohan would Make a huge impact on the world..
Their would a Global Reaction to Gohan.. Imagine this..
In reality how Would Humanity react to a Being that can destroy a planet in a instant.
I feel you really do not put much into this story.. You Gohan into this story... And the plot does change... AT ALL..
SECONDLY Gohan would never considerider being a Shinobi...That is not his thing. Someone like Mercnary Tao would fit in as a Mercnary Shinobi...but For Gohan he would to return to his World.. But Have to fit in the Shinobi world without drawing attention to himself..
As Powerful as Gohan is and as he get a better understanding of this World he would not want the World to know How Strong he is.
Someone like King Piccolo could easily solo the narutoverse.
I,am saying this story lacks a decent plot, lack Common sense on how to handle a crossover, and it just feels Bland and Generic as the Stories that downplay or need dragonball characters or that dbz character making no Unique Change to plot of Naruto.
Think about it
Bad grammer.. And No difference in plot..
Someone as powerful as Gohan would Make a huge impact on the world..
Their would a Global Reaction to Gohan.. Imagine this..
In reality how Would Humanity react to a Being that can destroy a planet in a instant.
I feel you really do not put much into this story.. You Gohan into this story... And the plot does change... AT ALL..
SECONDLY Gohan would never considerider being a Shinobi...That is not his thing. Someone like Mercnary Tao would fit in as a Mercnary Shinobi...but For Gohan he would to return to his World.. But Have to fit in the Shinobi world without drawing attention to himself..
As Powerful as Gohan is and as he get a better understanding of this World he would not want the World to know How Strong he is.
Someone like King Piccolo could easily solo the narutoverse.
I,am saying this story lacks a decent plot, lack Common sense on how to handle a crossover, and it just feels Bland and Generic as the Stories that downplay or need dragonball characters or that dbz character making no Unique Change to plot of Naruto.
Think about it
9/17/2016 c4 Guest
Temari and hinata for Gohan
Temari and hinata for Gohan
9/17/2016 c3 Guest
Please let it be hinata and temari
Please let it be hinata and temari
9/17/2016 c2 Guest
Gohan x temari x hinata
Gohan x temari x hinata
9/17/2016 c1 Guest
Gohan x hinata x temari
Gohan x hinata x temari
9/17/2016 c1 Guest
Gohan x hinata and temari
Gohan x hinata and temari