for Moon Cell Irregular4/30 c20 IsekaiFanBoi
Ryunosuke and Bluebeard just calling the Yotsuba worse than them for taking away Tatsuya’s emotions and apparently a piece of his soul just made me burst out in laughter lmao.
Ryunosuke and Bluebeard just calling the Yotsuba worse than them for taking away Tatsuya’s emotions and apparently a piece of his soul just made me burst out in laughter lmao.
4/29 c20 
4Antex-The Legendary Zoroark
Good work! Enjoyed this a ton! Seems like Tatsuya has caught the attention of Bluebeard/Gilles and to an extent, Ryuunosuke as well! That can only bode so well. It was also quite surprising to see Hakuno lose his cool like that! In game we always see him/her as often calm, aloof, sad in some cases, but rarely mad. So to see such a break in character just goes to show how this really affected him. It was still good to see both Jeanne and Tamamo be there to keep him grounded and comfort him though. It was so adorable. And to see Jeanne make a show-off move like that at the end was quite the scene too! Love rivals gotta show off against the other right? Lol!
Finally, seems we’ll be getting Archer as the next Servant! I can only guess which one it might be though. Will it be No Name/EMIYA? Or a certain Golden King of Uruk? It’ll be surprising if it’s neither! Makes me wonder if you’ve something unique planned if it’s the latter…
I also assume you’ll be saving the best for last? A certain Saber with a penchant for art and UMU’s? Lol. Keep up the great work!
4Antex-The Legendary ZoroarkGood work! Enjoyed this a ton! Seems like Tatsuya has caught the attention of Bluebeard/Gilles and to an extent, Ryuunosuke as well! That can only bode so well. It was also quite surprising to see Hakuno lose his cool like that! In game we always see him/her as often calm, aloof, sad in some cases, but rarely mad. So to see such a break in character just goes to show how this really affected him. It was still good to see both Jeanne and Tamamo be there to keep him grounded and comfort him though. It was so adorable. And to see Jeanne make a show-off move like that at the end was quite the scene too! Love rivals gotta show off against the other right? Lol!
Finally, seems we’ll be getting Archer as the next Servant! I can only guess which one it might be though. Will it be No Name/EMIYA? Or a certain Golden King of Uruk? It’ll be surprising if it’s neither! Makes me wonder if you’ve something unique planned if it’s the latter…
I also assume you’ll be saving the best for last? A certain Saber with a penchant for art and UMU’s? Lol. Keep up the great work!
4/28 c20 2WitnessofFate
I dont want to hear you calling someone doing anything to a kid fucked up considering what you do Ryuunosuke (even if it’s true) lol
2WitnessofFateI dont want to hear you calling someone doing anything to a kid fucked up considering what you do Ryuunosuke (even if it’s true) lol
4/28 c20 X6-88
You have no idea how shocked/surprised/happy I was to see an update for this story! But let’s get to Brass tracks.
We go to our serial killer duo and they are talking about what just happened as they drive away on a stolen military car. They manage to get whatever they were looking for, which safe to say is whatever they ripped out of said girl they just killed in the Stadium for a ritual. Safe to say its going to be nasty. Funny enough Gilles starts talking about his encounter with Tatsuya and how neutered his emotions are. Which leaves him wondering what kind of person(s) would do such a thing? It really says something when a famous historic serial killer is weirded out as well as finding it pretty messed up that someone would do such a thing.
Of course that’s the Shiba Family/Clan for you. Idiots who wanted to make the “ultimate Magician” who could protect the family forever and neuter his emotions to “prevent” any emotional outbursts and had no foresight they were making a walking time bomb and that’s frankly the best case the worst case is a super psychopath.
Meanwhile we got various “actors” leaving the stage. Or in a particular servant case he’s being thrown out in a massive fireball!
Much to Magatsu displeasure/frustration he has two detectives seeing what his “Warlord” looks like, granted if they were smart it should have been obvious given how Magatsu said it wasn’t a bomb and it fought against zombie Kaiju, and if there were even more, they would not ask questions, but I don’t know if they have any common sense. Side note looks like those cuffs on Nagayoshi can shock him, man its easy to see the relationship between master/servant is strained.
But that’s small details given how said stadium just blew up in a massive fireball/explosion
Aria provides some info/backstory about the stadium and what it stands for and what it brought from the events hosted through the years and yeah…its burning to ash right now. There is NO WAY to hide this and the whole country is about to hear this within hours unless the government tries to do martial law/information blackout but that’s impossible given where and who is involved here. And given how things were pretty tense its hard to say how things would go from here. Though one thing is safe to say is Kundou efforts in “regaining” the 100 families pride is dead in the water, for all everyone who was involved (excluding Hakuno, caster, Aria, and Archer) a serial killer was able to kill a student in an armed event despite all the security and soldiers posted as well destroyed the stadium and all it stood for and walked away with not a scratch. It’s a massive black mark for the people involved. Then there’s the Harway little “clause” if they 100 families were unable to pay for the festival which went from Damocles sword hanging over them to coming down on them like the tunguska meteor. The nine school competition is officially dead and if there is any silver lining Hakuno school doesn't need to worry about ending dead last due to how things ended here. Though everyone is going to feel angry/bitter how things went.
Meanwhile Kyouko has to deal with the fact she has people who are better than what she is good at. And Tatsuya shows his lack of tact with him pointing out there are people better than her. More importantly/annoyingly he shows he’s going back to looking into Aira and more importantly Hakuno despite what he promised. Then again why should I be surprised as he is willing to kill other people just to keep his little sister “safe”. Though there is nothing going to strange about Hakuno background because there is nothing there. As for the servants Alias? No there will be nothing off about those either.
As Tatsuya gets back to the group few are showing concerns over what happened while others are still distracted by Mario Kart which is a friendly reminder how quickly this whole fiasco went.
Meanwhile we have Aira meeting Blackmore who can tell things went pear shaped. Granted a stadium on fire that continuously exploding tells you how everything went. We also learn there are more master/servants than we thought last time which is shocking since I only thought there was 4 masters/servants and now we have to deal with far more! Granted Blackmore informs those people thought the whole event was a game and odds are they all died on the first week.
Then we go to Hakuno who has learned an unfortunate quirk about the moon cell not just letting get the info he wants he has to put in actual leg work to get it. That would be very frustrating to deal with. Then we go to our lovely interaction between Caster and Ruler, and may I say I love how they act to each other? It makes me really wonder what is going to happen when Nero finally shows up. Also, that comment of “That significant property damage was there when we got there” with a straight face did make me laugh!
Sadly, Hakuno can’t exactly laugh due to how Ryuunosuke and Gilles made a clean get away and other people will pay the price for it. Which makes him feeling angry about himself, feeling responsible for the failure. I can’t say I been in that exact boat, but I can understand feeling angry/bitter about something that you feel responsible for or could have done better.
Also, Ryuunosuke a saint? I can’t even laugh at that.
Also looks like Archer (EMIYA) is going to show up! Unless it’s someone else? Going to have to wait and see. But until then I will wait with eager breath! Stay Golden!
You have no idea how shocked/surprised/happy I was to see an update for this story! But let’s get to Brass tracks.
We go to our serial killer duo and they are talking about what just happened as they drive away on a stolen military car. They manage to get whatever they were looking for, which safe to say is whatever they ripped out of said girl they just killed in the Stadium for a ritual. Safe to say its going to be nasty. Funny enough Gilles starts talking about his encounter with Tatsuya and how neutered his emotions are. Which leaves him wondering what kind of person(s) would do such a thing? It really says something when a famous historic serial killer is weirded out as well as finding it pretty messed up that someone would do such a thing.
Of course that’s the Shiba Family/Clan for you. Idiots who wanted to make the “ultimate Magician” who could protect the family forever and neuter his emotions to “prevent” any emotional outbursts and had no foresight they were making a walking time bomb and that’s frankly the best case the worst case is a super psychopath.
Meanwhile we got various “actors” leaving the stage. Or in a particular servant case he’s being thrown out in a massive fireball!
Much to Magatsu displeasure/frustration he has two detectives seeing what his “Warlord” looks like, granted if they were smart it should have been obvious given how Magatsu said it wasn’t a bomb and it fought against zombie Kaiju, and if there were even more, they would not ask questions, but I don’t know if they have any common sense. Side note looks like those cuffs on Nagayoshi can shock him, man its easy to see the relationship between master/servant is strained.
But that’s small details given how said stadium just blew up in a massive fireball/explosion
Aria provides some info/backstory about the stadium and what it stands for and what it brought from the events hosted through the years and yeah…its burning to ash right now. There is NO WAY to hide this and the whole country is about to hear this within hours unless the government tries to do martial law/information blackout but that’s impossible given where and who is involved here. And given how things were pretty tense its hard to say how things would go from here. Though one thing is safe to say is Kundou efforts in “regaining” the 100 families pride is dead in the water, for all everyone who was involved (excluding Hakuno, caster, Aria, and Archer) a serial killer was able to kill a student in an armed event despite all the security and soldiers posted as well destroyed the stadium and all it stood for and walked away with not a scratch. It’s a massive black mark for the people involved. Then there’s the Harway little “clause” if they 100 families were unable to pay for the festival which went from Damocles sword hanging over them to coming down on them like the tunguska meteor. The nine school competition is officially dead and if there is any silver lining Hakuno school doesn't need to worry about ending dead last due to how things ended here. Though everyone is going to feel angry/bitter how things went.
Meanwhile Kyouko has to deal with the fact she has people who are better than what she is good at. And Tatsuya shows his lack of tact with him pointing out there are people better than her. More importantly/annoyingly he shows he’s going back to looking into Aira and more importantly Hakuno despite what he promised. Then again why should I be surprised as he is willing to kill other people just to keep his little sister “safe”. Though there is nothing going to strange about Hakuno background because there is nothing there. As for the servants Alias? No there will be nothing off about those either.
As Tatsuya gets back to the group few are showing concerns over what happened while others are still distracted by Mario Kart which is a friendly reminder how quickly this whole fiasco went.
Meanwhile we have Aira meeting Blackmore who can tell things went pear shaped. Granted a stadium on fire that continuously exploding tells you how everything went. We also learn there are more master/servants than we thought last time which is shocking since I only thought there was 4 masters/servants and now we have to deal with far more! Granted Blackmore informs those people thought the whole event was a game and odds are they all died on the first week.
Then we go to Hakuno who has learned an unfortunate quirk about the moon cell not just letting get the info he wants he has to put in actual leg work to get it. That would be very frustrating to deal with. Then we go to our lovely interaction between Caster and Ruler, and may I say I love how they act to each other? It makes me really wonder what is going to happen when Nero finally shows up. Also, that comment of “That significant property damage was there when we got there” with a straight face did make me laugh!
Sadly, Hakuno can’t exactly laugh due to how Ryuunosuke and Gilles made a clean get away and other people will pay the price for it. Which makes him feeling angry about himself, feeling responsible for the failure. I can’t say I been in that exact boat, but I can understand feeling angry/bitter about something that you feel responsible for or could have done better.
Also, Ryuunosuke a saint? I can’t even laugh at that.
Also looks like Archer (EMIYA) is going to show up! Unless it’s someone else? Going to have to wait and see. But until then I will wait with eager breath! Stay Golden!
4/27 c20 Shen1412
Amazing chapter as usual
And holy hell even Gilles is in awe of whats the Yotsuba did to Tatsuya lol, so much questions btw is Zoe the character from PJO?
And it seems like we will be getting an archer? Who will it be i wonder, part of me wants to be male but another part of me wants it to be female, either way going to enjoy the rider
Amazing chapter as usual
And holy hell even Gilles is in awe of whats the Yotsuba did to Tatsuya lol, so much questions btw is Zoe the character from PJO?
And it seems like we will be getting an archer? Who will it be i wonder, part of me wants to be male but another part of me wants it to be female, either way going to enjoy the rider
4/27 c20 1SunnyasOmori
Welcome back mate! And the last section, I cant not wait for the next chapter!
1SunnyasOmoriWelcome back mate! And the last section, I cant not wait for the next chapter!
12/30/2024 c11 1springywinter
Holy moly, does this mean Hakuno will eventually meet up with all the Servants he contracted in alternate teimelines? Oh, that'll be chaotic and fun to see how the dynamics pan out XD
I love how this frame scene worked out, with Leonardo seemingly on the advantage since he's aware to more information.
1springywinterHoly moly, does this mean Hakuno will eventually meet up with all the Servants he contracted in alternate teimelines? Oh, that'll be chaotic and fun to see how the dynamics pan out XD
I love how this frame scene worked out, with Leonardo seemingly on the advantage since he's aware to more information.
11/4/2024 c19 codeninja676
Gah I can't wait for the next chapter if I'm reading the tone right it's getting closer to the point where stuff will have to be revealed if Hakuna wants to keep his friends safe and stop the rogue masters from causing more damage to the mages
Gah I can't wait for the next chapter if I'm reading the tone right it's getting closer to the point where stuff will have to be revealed if Hakuna wants to keep his friends safe and stop the rogue masters from causing more damage to the mages
11/1/2024 c19 Amatsumi
Nah the Tatsuya loss is fine due to Conceptual Priority.
I'm interested what he is doing right due to his pursuit of agenda.
Nah the Tatsuya loss is fine due to Conceptual Priority.
I'm interested what he is doing right due to his pursuit of agenda.
11/1/2024 c7 For'Sleep 3rd
To:Psychored1911
I'm not well versed with Mahouka... but Tatsuya Material Burst...Do servants get damaged in Spirit form?
Considering Gilles just not bye bye Tatsuya by going spirit form...
To:Psychored1911
I'm not well versed with Mahouka... but Tatsuya Material Burst...Do servants get damaged in Spirit form?
Considering Gilles just not bye bye Tatsuya by going spirit form...
11/1/2024 c19 Phantom Thief of Hearts
Well...the stadium is no longer usable, lol.
On the other hand, the whole situation got out of hand with all that destruction caused, so subtlety was no longer an option, XD.
The scene between Tatsuya and Gilles was interesting. And I understand Gilles' reasons for not being interested in killing Tatsuya because there would be no excitement for Gilles if he did...and as I said before, it's a big red flag when someone like Gilles isn't interested in killing you, XD.
I liked the appearance of the monster worm.
On the other hand, it will be interesting to know what will happen next due to the events that occurred in this chapter (and a lot of things happened that will have an impact).
I liked that Airi and Archer had their moment to shine.
On the other hand, the two Hakuno have already appeared in FGO (Japanese) this year. Which means good things for this fanfic*wink**wink*. And then we have the Fate Extra(Remake) for 2025.
Good luck,Bro.
Well...the stadium is no longer usable, lol.
On the other hand, the whole situation got out of hand with all that destruction caused, so subtlety was no longer an option, XD.
The scene between Tatsuya and Gilles was interesting. And I understand Gilles' reasons for not being interested in killing Tatsuya because there would be no excitement for Gilles if he did...and as I said before, it's a big red flag when someone like Gilles isn't interested in killing you, XD.
I liked the appearance of the monster worm.
On the other hand, it will be interesting to know what will happen next due to the events that occurred in this chapter (and a lot of things happened that will have an impact).
I liked that Airi and Archer had their moment to shine.
On the other hand, the two Hakuno have already appeared in FGO (Japanese) this year. Which means good things for this fanfic*wink**wink*. And then we have the Fate Extra(Remake) for 2025.
Good luck,Bro.
10/31/2024 c4 For'Sleep 3rd
To:X6-88
Sorry typo, i mean that JSDF will not trust with Hundred Families with that issue...
Considering politic, because Hundred Families preception of Majority if Japan while they will protect Japan, But their will put first Their Families benefit foremost.
So yeah, I can see Higher ups in JSDF will not agree with Hundred Families influence in this matter
To:X6-88
Sorry typo, i mean that JSDF will not trust with Hundred Families with that issue...
Considering politic, because Hundred Families preception of Majority if Japan while they will protect Japan, But their will put first Their Families benefit foremost.
So yeah, I can see Higher ups in JSDF will not agree with Hundred Families influence in this matter