for The never meant to be Secret9/12/2016 c1 Guest
This is a great start but here's a tip for future chapters: Don't do a repeat of the first episode. Many stories have that and it will bore the reader.
This is a great start but here's a tip for future chapters: Don't do a repeat of the first episode. Many stories have that and it will bore the reader.
9/13/2016 c1 00-SilentObserver-13
That was hilarious! This is interesting and I hope you continue it too bad the first chapter is sort of like a cliff hanger I wanted to read more about their reactions. Will the rest of shanks crew be told by shanks or benn that luffy is a girl and not a boy?
That was hilarious! This is interesting and I hope you continue it too bad the first chapter is sort of like a cliff hanger I wanted to read more about their reactions. Will the rest of shanks crew be told by shanks or benn that luffy is a girl and not a boy?
9/12/2016 c1 MossDoll
I love your story! Actually I particulary don't care for romance, but tomboish femLuffy and overprotective big bros are always welcomeI also loved Shanks being worried about her too, hehehe).
I love your story! Actually I particulary don't care for romance, but tomboish femLuffy and overprotective big bros are always welcomeI also loved Shanks being worried about her too, hehehe).
9/12/2016 c1 
5Kyo-The-Sheep
Oh guy, that was really fun. I never like when the people change the sex of a character because they become OOC. But i have to admit, this far, i enjoy you fic. So i hope to see more and i whish you good luck for the next!
With Love and Hugs
A Sheep
5Kyo-The-SheepOh guy, that was really fun. I never like when the people change the sex of a character because they become OOC. But i have to admit, this far, i enjoy you fic. So i hope to see more and i whish you good luck for the next!
With Love and Hugs
A Sheep
9/12/2016 c1 57RealityXIllusion
I think you should definitely continue this! I love that you kept making IT a cucumber...hehe.
I can totally imagine how protective shanks, hell even ace and Sabo are gonna become. Btw I'm really glad you wrote that Sabo's gonna live because I'm still sad he wasn't there as ace and luffy grew up.
57RealityXIllusionI think you should definitely continue this! I love that you kept making IT a cucumber...hehe.
I can totally imagine how protective shanks, hell even ace and Sabo are gonna become. Btw I'm really glad you wrote that Sabo's gonna live because I'm still sad he wasn't there as ace and luffy grew up.
9/12/2016 c1 1yggdrasil001
This is so funny! I love this completely oblivious female Luffy, she is soooo cute :D Don't stop now, I really want to see Sabo and Ace reactions (I thought they were going to find out while they took a bath lol)! Please, update soon, I can't wait to see more of this story!
1yggdrasil001This is so funny! I love this completely oblivious female Luffy, she is soooo cute :D Don't stop now, I really want to see Sabo and Ace reactions (I thought they were going to find out while they took a bath lol)! Please, update soon, I can't wait to see more of this story!
9/11/2016 c1 19Syluk
hehe Shanks' part was really fun to read, I loved his reaction xD
And, hey, it's not just me who thinks that Sabo can't drink! lol
19Sylukhehe Shanks' part was really fun to read, I loved his reaction xD
And, hey, it's not just me who thinks that Sabo can't drink! lol
9/11/2016 c1 3MidnightStar64
OH. YES. I FREAKING LOVE THIS. o
Whenever I read female Luffy fics, I get really irritated because she tends to seem OOC to me. Often I just wish that nothing would really change between them. I mean, sure the periods would be a problem, but why the hell would Luffy care about something as simple as gender? Boy, Girl, Neither. Why should any of that matter? I can only see Luffy's determination and think that Luffy will change the OP world.
Seriously. Keep running with this. I repeat, I freaking love this.
3MidnightStar64OH. YES. I FREAKING LOVE THIS. o
Whenever I read female Luffy fics, I get really irritated because she tends to seem OOC to me. Often I just wish that nothing would really change between them. I mean, sure the periods would be a problem, but why the hell would Luffy care about something as simple as gender? Boy, Girl, Neither. Why should any of that matter? I can only see Luffy's determination and think that Luffy will change the OP world.
Seriously. Keep running with this. I repeat, I freaking love this.