
1/14/2017 c1 Mashiro Ruri
That's so adorable~~ I am looking forward to the next chapter (this is not complete so it's not a one-shot right?)
That's so adorable~~ I am looking forward to the next chapter (this is not complete so it's not a one-shot right?)
10/16/2016 c1
2toraneko-chan
This is a good beginning to a pretty cute story idea. I hope you continue it!

This is a good beginning to a pretty cute story idea. I hope you continue it!
10/11/2016 c1
11dhyetaX1999
Wooow! This is awesome! I love how you write Papa!Neah and baby!Allen's cuteness. I'd love to read more of this universe. Maybe spin-off like when Sheryl finally clap eyes on the utterly adorable form of toddler!Allen. Or how Tyki corrupts Allen so born Black!Allen who'll strip you of money and dignity in poker

Wooow! This is awesome! I love how you write Papa!Neah and baby!Allen's cuteness. I'd love to read more of this universe. Maybe spin-off like when Sheryl finally clap eyes on the utterly adorable form of toddler!Allen. Or how Tyki corrupts Allen so born Black!Allen who'll strip you of money and dignity in poker
9/28/2016 c1 Lilyyy of the Valley
That was sooooo cute, sweet, heartwarming, and funny and ugh, too many feelings...not enough words
Thank you soo much for writing and posting this story, I really like it :D
That was sooooo cute, sweet, heartwarming, and funny and ugh, too many feelings...not enough words
Thank you soo much for writing and posting this story, I really like it :D
9/16/2016 c1
5The Awesome Meeeee
I really like this, a nice combination of funny and fluffy! Please continue! Although, just as a side note, how old are Allen and Neah?

I really like this, a nice combination of funny and fluffy! Please continue! Although, just as a side note, how old are Allen and Neah?