for Money is Power - A Mercenary Tale10/22/2016 c2 Bunny153539
You had me, and then you made my day at the end when you said explaining stuff in the AN would be admitting you can not do so in the story. So many authors just explain crud in their AN's and it basically spells the death of the story :D
You had me, and then you made my day at the end when you said explaining stuff in the AN would be admitting you can not do so in the story. So many authors just explain crud in their AN's and it basically spells the death of the story :D
10/7/2016 c1 MarkAntimony
Having the Magus-Killer go after Voldemort?
Considering how ineffectual most of the ruthless but terribly out of touch Magi do against Kiritsugu, I have a feeling that this story is going to be amazing (and possibly have Malfoy Manor leveled).
Looking forward to more chapters.
Having the Magus-Killer go after Voldemort?
Considering how ineffectual most of the ruthless but terribly out of touch Magi do against Kiritsugu, I have a feeling that this story is going to be amazing (and possibly have Malfoy Manor leveled).
Looking forward to more chapters.
10/3/2016 c1 
3GambitofThornes
I like this I really like this. Using all that, or a significant chunk at least, money to hire the best damn magic killer in the world to deal with Moldyshorts. :)
3GambitofThornesI like this I really like this. Using all that, or a significant chunk at least, money to hire the best damn magic killer in the world to deal with Moldyshorts. :)
9/18/2016 c1 1A New User
Wait a second. Magic Circuits are inscribed on the soul right? So if one grazes Voldemort, even if he lives, wouldn't he be virtually mundane? Just a thought.
1A New UserWait a second. Magic Circuits are inscribed on the soul right? So if one grazes Voldemort, even if he lives, wouldn't he be virtually mundane? Just a thought.
9/18/2016 c1 7Paxloria
Small errors aside, I think that this is REALLY SUPER GREAT and I would just LOVE IT if you could post a few more chapters soon!
7PaxloriaSmall errors aside, I think that this is REALLY SUPER GREAT and I would just LOVE IT if you could post a few more chapters soon!
9/17/2016 c1 Guest
Oh God, this is gonna be such an awesome stomp...
Oh God, this is gonna be such an awesome stomp...
9/16/2016 c1 Kid
Interesting wait for next chapter.
Interesting wait for next chapter.
9/16/2016 c1 Guest
Oooh, the suspense is killing me! I like it! Weird to see Harry cast an unforgivable.
Oooh, the suspense is killing me! I like it! Weird to see Harry cast an unforgivable.
9/17/2016 c1 Nine Lives Bladeworks
Amazing story so far. Your conceptualization is brilliant and so far there are no obvious plotholes in this story. I will have to reserve judgement based on how you handle the two magic systems and how you balance the two settings but so far it seems alright. Your Fidelius usage is especially inspired although it could be elaborated on. Would it have to be a deliberate reveal? How would it handle having a muggleborn being born to a Magus family? Still, I look forward to seeing you continue with this story.
Amazing story so far. Your conceptualization is brilliant and so far there are no obvious plotholes in this story. I will have to reserve judgement based on how you handle the two magic systems and how you balance the two settings but so far it seems alright. Your Fidelius usage is especially inspired although it could be elaborated on. Would it have to be a deliberate reveal? How would it handle having a muggleborn being born to a Magus family? Still, I look forward to seeing you continue with this story.
9/16/2016 c1 DragonNOOB
I cracked up laughing so hard when I read the summery. This story is going to one heck of a wild ride.
I cracked up laughing so hard when I read the summery. This story is going to one heck of a wild ride.
9/16/2016 c1 10Deathwatch Razgriz
Here's some red meat for you then, I enjoyed this first look a lot. As such I would VERY much enjoy reading more.
10Deathwatch RazgrizHere's some red meat for you then, I enjoyed this first look a lot. As such I would VERY much enjoy reading more.