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3/12/2022 c2 edoabb
Golden trio? Did they just replace Harry? Moreover I get that this is supposed to be a war torn world that has been suffering from years of Voldemort going around, but then why don't we see any repercussions? The only thing is that the people are weary... Wow
10/15/2021 c5 Aratherfluffyfatcat
Enjoying the story thanks
7/11/2021 c5 APridefulSin
golden amazing thank you
2/1/2021 c4 5Seprith Li Castia
Short, but I rather like this idea. The concept of a silent bell hanging at Hogwarts' entrance, ever tempting yet absolute. An inspired creation.
8/31/2020 c5 2Seth A. Mincberg
CONTINUE THIS!
5/2/2020 c5 dylansandy1993
I've read this twice. Still love it.

It's such a fun retelling of the two franchises (three) that I can't help but chuckle reading it. I do wish that certain characters who rung the bell had been singled out . such as the first or the last in Dumbledore's time.
6/14/2019 c3 sondrex76
Interesting concept.

I found a few potential misspellings and such:
1
"WAs it not her generation's duty " - "Was it not her generation's duty "
" rely on summoning who could be " - " rely on summoning someone who could be "
"as well been the cause of latest" - "as well as been the cause of the latest"
" one her junior" - " one of her junior"
2
" sides of war as a miracle hand," - " sides of the war as a miracle hand,"
"view Harry was a person after" - "view Harry as a person after"
"as both pro and a con, " - "as both a pro and a con, "
"eloquent of individual," - "eloquent of individuals,"
"had been at the living room" - "had been in the living room"
"d to the his Nightmare and pondered." - "d to his Nightmare and pondered."
"She was youngest of his " - "She was the youngest of his "
"It's been weeks" - "It'd been weeks"
3
" exactly what I would traded " - " exactly what I would have traded "
"aw a figure walked up to where" - "aw a figure who walked up to where"
"ut leather trench coat" - "ut a leather trench coat"
"not if, decides to run the city down for heres" who is going to do it is not specified
4
" which these creatures seem to seek not " - " which these creatures seemed to seek not "
"The word will spread, regardless of facts, and it will dissuade " - "The word would spread, regardless of facts, and it would dissuade "
"for all to wish to ring the bell:" - "for all who wish to ring the bell:"
"because their mind" - "because their minds"
"But every then and now" - "But every now and then"
" a danger to wizarding world." - " a danger to the wizarding world."
"Thsoe who tried were" - "Those who tried were"
5
"surrounding; if there " - "surroundings; if there "

Thanks for writing and have a nice day.
12/13/2018 c5 Guest
While the recursion of a Saito who's already been through ZoT is indeed interesting.

I think that if local Louise had summoned one of her counterparts a la "The Hunter" by "Arawn D. Draven", then it would've dialled up the mind screwery up to Lovegood level.

Facing an older, taller and far more dangerous version of herself. One possibly trained in Terran Magic by "Harry" to offset the flaws in her native system.

Goldfish looks all abound and that would be prior to her actual transformation.
8/21/2018 c5 Ryoji Mochizuki
Lol.
5/5/2018 c5 TheAutarch
Laughed so hard at this chapter would love to know how it ends up
5/5/2018 c1 TheAutarch
Yeas the story i have been looking for
4/1/2018 c5 Leblanc23
that got ill admit it.
1/4/2018 c1 Guest
...Dumbledore is literally, canonically gay.
6/19/2017 c5 5Exiled Soul Nomad
I loved that ending.
4/25/2017 c5 Dustier7
Poor poor Louise, she can never have a break xD. I wonder what'll happen next!?
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