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7/31/2017 c3 1Beloved Daughter
Sounds like a good plot, but I find this story hard to read as you use ; as quotation marks for speech. Most people, including myself, are trained by habit to look for "" when reading script instead of a semicolon, which typically indicates a pause in thought or writing.
1/19/2017 c23 spicyrash
I started reading this story for it had had a interesting summary... But the story is confusing...
Can you please revise the chapters and improve grammar and give more structure to the story?
I really want to read it but it is not very clear...

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