for Wanderer5/28 c3 TsukuyoGintoki
that was literally the dumbest way to describe what happened LOL you literally made him sound evil. wtf?
I like this story but I don't like that you're making Harry's emotions to mixed with hers. he is in control of the body he his emotions should be the ones that are stronger. he's in his fifties he's not some 12-year-old school boy anymore.
actually even at 12 years old Harry was more confident than the person you're writing.
plus the whole thing with being embarrassed about getting dressed? come on. how immature is harry?
plus too much time is getting spent describing things that we already know.
that was literally the dumbest way to describe what happened LOL you literally made him sound evil. wtf?
I like this story but I don't like that you're making Harry's emotions to mixed with hers. he is in control of the body he his emotions should be the ones that are stronger. he's in his fifties he's not some 12-year-old school boy anymore.
actually even at 12 years old Harry was more confident than the person you're writing.
plus the whole thing with being embarrassed about getting dressed? come on. how immature is harry?
plus too much time is getting spent describing things that we already know.
5/28 c3 TsukuyoGintoki
he wasn't foolish enough to believe that some form of God's don't exist? LOL that's ridiculous if anything the wizards would have concluded that the religions all come from muggles trying to explain magic. Harry wasn't religious. and there's no reason as a wizard that he would have ever become religious.
he wasn't foolish enough to believe that some form of God's don't exist? LOL that's ridiculous if anything the wizards would have concluded that the religions all come from muggles trying to explain magic. Harry wasn't religious. and there's no reason as a wizard that he would have ever become religious.
8/14/2020 c3 Jestersky98
Jesus have him grow a fucking spine, over 30 years as a head auror and he still can't talk like a normal person like fidgeting like a little girl
Jesus have him grow a fucking spine, over 30 years as a head auror and he still can't talk like a normal person like fidgeting like a little girl
12/15/2018 c1 RatherFabulous
While your command of English has an occasional bobble (and that's true of many native English speakers as well, of course), the final montage of chaos and memories was very well done.
While your command of English has an occasional bobble (and that's true of many native English speakers as well, of course), the final montage of chaos and memories was very well done.
11/21/2018 c4 
1Fawkes Flame
Hi there, it's been a long time... Is there a chance you will continue this story? I love it ans I'd like to read more!
1Fawkes FlameHi there, it's been a long time... Is there a chance you will continue this story? I love it ans I'd like to read more!
11/10/2018 c4 1Priest
Rather interesting story and I would like to see you continue at someday soon rather than later but whatever keep up the good work.
1PriestRather interesting story and I would like to see you continue at someday soon rather than later but whatever keep up the good work.
1/20/2018 c4 Fallow54
xxxx Kudos xxxx : )
xxxx Kudos xxxx : )
7/4/2017 c2 Disgruntled Imp
XD you total tricked me there with the TG, too bad for me though.
XD you total tricked me there with the TG, too bad for me though.
6/13/2017 c4 Ng
This is awesome! Can't wait for more
This is awesome! Can't wait for more
6/7/2017 c4 Alumys
I like it and hope that you will continue to write ; )
I also found Hilarious the fact that Harry is stuck in a female body XD
I like it and hope that you will continue to write ; )
I also found Hilarious the fact that Harry is stuck in a female body XD