for One went to Hell2/19 c22 Guest
Veeeery good story! I love the main persona and without a doubt the new twist you gave Edward, very fresh and more attractive. I think that the main character is actually in a coma and this is all some kind of dream or something, or that his soul was the one that traveled to another dimension to learn lessons and that's how he ended up here. It will hurt me to see him return but it will be such an emotional and exciting time. I want to see how the story develops with Edward and what will happen to him when she returns, also what will happen when Jacob finds out about this secret, if he will believe him. I need to read it! I hope you don't abandon the story. It's very good. English is not my original language so I hope I have written this without so many grammatical errors.
Veeeery good story! I love the main persona and without a doubt the new twist you gave Edward, very fresh and more attractive. I think that the main character is actually in a coma and this is all some kind of dream or something, or that his soul was the one that traveled to another dimension to learn lessons and that's how he ended up here. It will hurt me to see him return but it will be such an emotional and exciting time. I want to see how the story develops with Edward and what will happen to him when she returns, also what will happen when Jacob finds out about this secret, if he will believe him. I need to read it! I hope you don't abandon the story. It's very good. English is not my original language so I hope I have written this without so many grammatical errors.
7/29/2022 c21 Mariafivi
Hello Author!
I read your story yesterday and I have to say, I am in love with your character. I really love the character development and overall writing too. I will wait for the next update!
Hello Author!
I read your story yesterday and I have to say, I am in love with your character. I really love the character development and overall writing too. I will wait for the next update!
5/22/2022 c2 Daboop Jones
why don't she just tell someone she don't know whats going on instead of bein awkward? I mean I woulda been straight up instead of putting that much pressure on myself and got away from living with strangers
why don't she just tell someone she don't know whats going on instead of bein awkward? I mean I woulda been straight up instead of putting that much pressure on myself and got away from living with strangers
3/8/2022 c1 Maybida
I’m sorry to say but you are whiny and seems determined to hate everyone and everything. Just saying!
I’m sorry to say but you are whiny and seems determined to hate everyone and everything. Just saying!
2/12/2022 c21 Hariana Halone
OMG finally someone who sees the Twilight saga for what it is. A fucking shit. The author highlights the sick stuff that is present in the story, this unhealthy fucking relationship between Bella and Edward. Many tried but we ended up disappointing because they can't hate Bella for long but you made it. And Edward to change, as he should have, this annoying asshole is better now. I love the OC, she's awesome. The difference between this fanfiction and the others are many, she is not a copy/c of the novel, the OC has not taken Bella's place by being another idiot and does not want to be fucked and be charmed by every Cullen. She never even went to their house and got eaten by mommy Cullen.. Hdhshzgsyzvzuzvuz it's a fucking perfection!
OMG finally someone who sees the Twilight saga for what it is. A fucking shit. The author highlights the sick stuff that is present in the story, this unhealthy fucking relationship between Bella and Edward. Many tried but we ended up disappointing because they can't hate Bella for long but you made it. And Edward to change, as he should have, this annoying asshole is better now. I love the OC, she's awesome. The difference between this fanfiction and the others are many, she is not a copy/c of the novel, the OC has not taken Bella's place by being another idiot and does not want to be fucked and be charmed by every Cullen. She never even went to their house and got eaten by mommy Cullen.. Hdhshzgsyzvzuzvuz it's a fucking perfection!
11/9/2021 c11 Guest
I’m out. I wanted this story to be about what was wrong with twilight. Instead we get more of the same shit. And it still makes zero sense. The main character is just a selfish bitch. The other end of the spectrum from Bella but just as useless a human being.
I’m out. I wanted this story to be about what was wrong with twilight. Instead we get more of the same shit. And it still makes zero sense. The main character is just a selfish bitch. The other end of the spectrum from Bella but just as useless a human being.
5/30/2021 c1 
3Guddu tales
oh god! YOUR BOOK IS AMAZING. I have only read one chapter yet and I related to each and every word you wrote! wow.
3Guddu talesoh god! YOUR BOOK IS AMAZING. I have only read one chapter yet and I related to each and every word you wrote! wow.
2/28/2021 c16 2UnknownBlanked
See?! This is what a Twilight Fanfic should be like! 90% of OC twilight fanfics are a version of copy and paste from the real novel. FINALLY! I’ve found one that highlights Edward’s personality and lines differently! This is the one! I’m so tired from reading all the same lines from different fanfics, good lord.
Also, I kinda regret starting to read this before it was completed. Now I gotta wait. Dammit
2UnknownBlankedSee?! This is what a Twilight Fanfic should be like! 90% of OC twilight fanfics are a version of copy and paste from the real novel. FINALLY! I’ve found one that highlights Edward’s personality and lines differently! This is the one! I’m so tired from reading all the same lines from different fanfics, good lord.
Also, I kinda regret starting to read this before it was completed. Now I gotta wait. Dammit