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7/9/2023 c1 7SilverCat64
Oh my goodness u know how to write a freakin slow burn. Theres some much tension between them its pliable and so romantic how much they care care for each other. Fantatisc writing.
2/19/2023 c8 thatsalll
Hi! I don't know if you're ever going to see this but I just wanted to say that this is SUCH a good slow burn. I really like Mal and Regina's relationship here and I hope to see more, perhaps? I really hope you update this fic. It's definitely one of my all time faves and I think about it a lot. I also want to ask if you're doing all right? It's been years so I am quite concerned.
10/31/2018 c1 GreenTeamint
For the love of the goddess! this was a really good slow burn...but it's not finished! Sweet child! any chance you might have some end planned to this?
2/11/2018 c8 HowNowBrownCow0603
Yes Regina, you silly woman, the way you feel about Mal is magical. Still enjoying this and hope one day to see it continued.
2/11/2018 c7 HowNowBrownCow0603
You skipped showing us the bucket of cold water thrown on Regina moment? Shameful :D

It's fun to learn about the dragons in this world along with Regina.
2/11/2018 c6 HowNowBrownCow0603
While Regina being sick is terrible of course I still am chuckling at nurse Mal, she's endearing her her stumbling but haughty, dragons are superior to this, kind of way. Great chapter.
2/11/2018 c5 HowNowBrownCow0603
Yay! Finally Regina did it, and after an epic tantrum no less:)
2/11/2018 c3 HowNowBrownCow0603
I really enjoy the idea of this. There are some grammatical and spelling errors as well as sometimes I get a bit lost because the descriptions seem to be lost and I have to make small guesses as to character movements, but nothing too bad. I like how wise you make Mal while also keeping her very unpredictable and I look forward to her instructing Regina in magic.
2/11/2018 c1 HowNowBrownCow0603
Well this is an interesting start. Cool Mal and even though she is obviously still the abused pawn of her mother, obstinate Regina; can't wait to see her fiery.
11/4/2017 c8 2incloudines
I love this story so much! Please update soon 3

Also, I've just remembered, when it says "carina" maybe you meant to write "cariƱo"? I'm from Spain and I'd never heard that one before, tho I don't know if in Latin America that term is used. Letting you know just in case x
9/9/2017 c8 5Forever Galindafied
I adore this story! The tension is crazy Please update it soon.
6/8/2017 c7 Cass
I love how protective Mal is. )
5/2/2017 c6 AwkwardAspie
This story is great, you deserve more reviews! I can't wait for more of this story!
2/28/2017 c6 narutobones
Story is so sweet i love it please continue
1/19/2017 c5 Forever Galindafied
I love the slow burn. Looking forward to the next update.
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