for Gohan in space11/22/2016 c2 Zero
Well this was an interesting read in terms of a concept, I believe this should be explored further with a good spell check, a little re-work of grammar and adding a bit more cohesion. Add a bit of structure and flesh out the chapters a bit and you got yourself a pretty hilarious story. Here is a good luck to you on this.
Well this was an interesting read in terms of a concept, I believe this should be explored further with a good spell check, a little re-work of grammar and adding a bit more cohesion. Add a bit of structure and flesh out the chapters a bit and you got yourself a pretty hilarious story. Here is a good luck to you on this.