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Now we know what happens when a game doesn't make it past the concept stage
A new universe sprouts into existence
Now we know what happens when a game doesn't make it past the concept stage
A new universe sprouts into existence
5/7 c1 Guest
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Epic concept arts for games that were never made that was a very nice touch it can't improve the whole multi verse theory thing it could exist in one way or another
1eecobeoEpic concept arts for games that were never made that was a very nice touch it can't improve the whole multi verse theory thing it could exist in one way or another
5/5 c7 eecobeo
That was a big time skip I was expecting master chief and the hunters to Maybe take on the reaper sovereign or something like that
That was a big time skip I was expecting master chief and the hunters to Maybe take on the reaper sovereign or something like that
4/30 c8 Cooldude101011
Technically wouldn’t it be “women in doctors and nurses uniforms?” Jesus Christ, twelve!?
Technically wouldn’t it be “women in doctors and nurses uniforms?” Jesus Christ, twelve!?
4/30 c6 Cooldude101011
I assume the Asari can’t sense the sapient intelligence/consciousness of Lekgolo colonies of sufficient size? They can only sense the individual lekgolo worms? Also Sapience and Sentience are two different but similar things.
I assume the Asari can’t sense the sapient intelligence/consciousness of Lekgolo colonies of sufficient size? They can only sense the individual lekgolo worms? Also Sapience and Sentience are two different but similar things.
4/30 c4 Cooldude101011
Pelican bay? You mean the hangar right? Also apparently the Charon class has 2 main hangars. Maybe check out Halopedia? A possible fix to the gap on the Hunter’s backs can be solved by stronger energy shields and/or some kind of flexible part (like the Spartan undersuit/bodysuit).
Pelican bay? You mean the hangar right? Also apparently the Charon class has 2 main hangars. Maybe check out Halopedia? A possible fix to the gap on the Hunter’s backs can be solved by stronger energy shields and/or some kind of flexible part (like the Spartan undersuit/bodysuit).
4/29 c2 Cooldude101011
I assume the oxygen tanks under the upper armour are extra/backup oxygen? And I assume the air in the tanks is the same composition as Earth’s atmosphere? As pure oxygen wouldn’t be that healthy.
I assume the oxygen tanks under the upper armour are extra/backup oxygen? And I assume the air in the tanks is the same composition as Earth’s atmosphere? As pure oxygen wouldn’t be that healthy.
4/22 c1 kalebryancox
Great story and can I please know when the next chapter is going to be released can you have the spirit of fire show up in the story to help master chief please
Great story and can I please know when the next chapter is going to be released can you have the spirit of fire show up in the story to help master chief please
4/19 c18 Rexsnipspercabeth
You're BACK! I have loved this story after reading it years ago and almost gave up hope for an update. However I'm glad you are back and I hope doing well. I absolutely love the level of detail you have put in and the route you have taken.
You're BACK! I have loved this story after reading it years ago and almost gave up hope for an update. However I'm glad you are back and I hope doing well. I absolutely love the level of detail you have put in and the route you have taken.
4/14 c18 Doom30484
What is the frequency of your updates?
What is the frequency of your updates?
4/6 c15 YouDoYou
It's the Batarian "Hegemony", not Hierarchy. The Turians are a Hierarchy. I kept getting them confused. Also, so far you've been a little lax with identifying the species of some characters which is confusing when you see a non human name but no other descriptors. But otherwise it's a good story so far.
It's the Batarian "Hegemony", not Hierarchy. The Turians are a Hierarchy. I kept getting them confused. Also, so far you've been a little lax with identifying the species of some characters which is confusing when you see a non human name but no other descriptors. But otherwise it's a good story so far.