for Something Lost, Something Found12/21/2016 c1 
7TheRiverScribe
This was gorgeous. Poetic and simple. This is one of the best moments in the show and a lot of fics don't look at what Dean did directly after Sam jumps. A perfect filler scene to the tragedy.
AND a samulet fixit! Fantastic!
7TheRiverScribeThis was gorgeous. Poetic and simple. This is one of the best moments in the show and a lot of fics don't look at what Dean did directly after Sam jumps. A perfect filler scene to the tragedy.
AND a samulet fixit! Fantastic!
11/16/2016 c1 M.J.Ellsworth
Wow! I don't normally read these types of introspective stories (I prefer more action), but this was beautiful. And of course Sam would leave a letter behind! When I read that, I had a lump in my throat. Well done! I really don't have constructive criticism - you have great writing abilities. You describe sights and sounds very well, your grammar's very good, and I only noticed a few typos (Dean would nave be able to joke around with Sam...), but that's okay! I find typos in my own writing all the time. It's because we do our own proof-reading, we're too close to our writing, and it's inevitable to miss stuff. Seriously, you have talent, and I'm so happy you made an account to share your work with the world. Keep it up! The more you write, the better you'll get, and before you know it, you'll be publishing stuff. ;-)
Wow! I don't normally read these types of introspective stories (I prefer more action), but this was beautiful. And of course Sam would leave a letter behind! When I read that, I had a lump in my throat. Well done! I really don't have constructive criticism - you have great writing abilities. You describe sights and sounds very well, your grammar's very good, and I only noticed a few typos (Dean would nave be able to joke around with Sam...), but that's okay! I find typos in my own writing all the time. It's because we do our own proof-reading, we're too close to our writing, and it's inevitable to miss stuff. Seriously, you have talent, and I'm so happy you made an account to share your work with the world. Keep it up! The more you write, the better you'll get, and before you know it, you'll be publishing stuff. ;-)
10/2/2016 c1 2ILoveSupernatural
That was absolutely beautiful! Loved it! You took the plot of Memories and made it your own.
Great job. Can't wait to read more of your fics. :)
2ILoveSupernaturalThat was absolutely beautiful! Loved it! You took the plot of Memories and made it your own.
Great job. Can't wait to read more of your fics. :)
9/29/2016 c1 Death Reader Skylar
im only 15 too... im not good in writing but suggesting.
I trying my best to writings
im only 15 too... im not good in writing but suggesting.
I trying my best to writings
9/28/2016 c1 Kathy
OMG, tears are literally dripping off my face, what lovely writing that can cause such emotion in a reader, you captured their essence beautifully, thank you
OMG, tears are literally dripping off my face, what lovely writing that can cause such emotion in a reader, you captured their essence beautifully, thank you
9/29/2016 c1 1Samanthawolfe
wow, I can't believe you are only 15... you captured the emotion of Dean in an incredible way... it was very well written and just gorgeous! I can't wait to see what you write next
1Samanthawolfewow, I can't believe you are only 15... you captured the emotion of Dean in an incredible way... it was very well written and just gorgeous! I can't wait to see what you write next