for Neptune's Revenge1/18/2020 c31 Chronus1326
Great story! Just got done and I'm starting on book 2 of Neptunes Revenge. I'm also 2 chapters behind on Copelands Supply now, darnit.
Great story! Just got done and I'm starting on book 2 of Neptunes Revenge. I'm also 2 chapters behind on Copelands Supply now, darnit.
1/14/2020 c16 Chronus1326
I was getting concerned that Jammer wouldn't get his third of the scouting haul payout.
I was getting concerned that Jammer wouldn't get his third of the scouting haul payout.
1/14/2020 c12 Chronus1326
Oh poor Jammer...stuck in a cave with 2 fit Earth women. Kirk would be jelous.
Oh poor Jammer...stuck in a cave with 2 fit Earth women. Kirk would be jelous.
1/13/2020 c6 Chronus1326
Ahhh time to mis-jump!
However - I'm not sure if the Neptune's Revenge was said to have sea-surface to orbital weaponry.
Ahhh time to mis-jump!
However - I'm not sure if the Neptune's Revenge was said to have sea-surface to orbital weaponry.
1/13/2020 c5 Chronus1326
So I started with Coplands Supply. Now I'm here...on New Caprica, sweet! Great story so far! I have a long way to go! Thank you!
(At first, I wondered if Dexter was going to show Kelly a hand drawn Battlestar)
So I started with Coplands Supply. Now I'm here...on New Caprica, sweet! Great story so far! I have a long way to go! Thank you!
(At first, I wondered if Dexter was going to show Kelly a hand drawn Battlestar)
8/12/2017 c27 
4Sable Cold
Very action-packed.
You should re-check who was doing what during the Battle of New Caprica though. Helo is never shown flying vipers and IIRC is not qualified on them. He was however acting Executive Officer aboard the Galactica as Saul Tigh's replacement. Acting CAG was Kat. Hotdog led the ground support mission. No info on who was CAG for Pegasus, could be Marcia "Showboat" Case or Noel "Narcho" Allison.
4Sable ColdVery action-packed.
You should re-check who was doing what during the Battle of New Caprica though. Helo is never shown flying vipers and IIRC is not qualified on them. He was however acting Executive Officer aboard the Galactica as Saul Tigh's replacement. Acting CAG was Kat. Hotdog led the ground support mission. No info on who was CAG for Pegasus, could be Marcia "Showboat" Case or Noel "Narcho" Allison.
8/5/2017 c1 Guest
It looks good, but can you please fix the wall of text issue? Thank you!
It looks good, but can you please fix the wall of text issue? Thank you!
8/6/2017 c26 Sable Cold
I think you mean Racetrack, not Kat, on the Raptor. Kat is a viper pilot and acting CAG during the New Caprica arc. She wasn't the one who discovered the planet though, that was Racetrack and IIRC Skulls.
On another note, nice to see you're still going with this fic. You still need a beta/proofreader, but it's good to finally the battlestars in action.
I think you mean Racetrack, not Kat, on the Raptor. Kat is a viper pilot and acting CAG during the New Caprica arc. She wasn't the one who discovered the planet though, that was Racetrack and IIRC Skulls.
On another note, nice to see you're still going with this fic. You still need a beta/proofreader, but it's good to finally the battlestars in action.
7/9/2017 c24 Woeful Indeed
Wonderful story so far, I'm happy to offer my services as Beta. I do have to Warn you though, I am Australian so do spell some things differently. I can certainly stick to US English generally bit it is possible some Australian could slip in.
Wonderful story so far, I'm happy to offer my services as Beta. I do have to Warn you though, I am Australian so do spell some things differently. I can certainly stick to US English generally bit it is possible some Australian could slip in.
4/30/2017 c14 Alpha 12
First, thank you for writing this story. There is not a lot of Rifts stories out there, let alone, crossover ones. First, I an enjoying this story, BUT, you really need a good Beta reader for this. You seem to repeat things, and grammar and punctuation needs work. So please look for a Beta. Anyways, keep up the good work!
First, thank you for writing this story. There is not a lot of Rifts stories out there, let alone, crossover ones. First, I an enjoying this story, BUT, you really need a good Beta reader for this. You seem to repeat things, and grammar and punctuation needs work. So please look for a Beta. Anyways, keep up the good work!