Reviews: Neptune's Revenge

for Neptune's Revenge

1/29/2017 c12

1Bobboky
very good work

1/12/2017 c11 Bobboky
very good work

12/16/2016 c10 Bobboky
Very nice job

12/5/2016 c9 Bobboky
Very nice job

11/29/2016 c8 Bobboky
Very good work

11/19/2016 c7

4Sable Cold
Finally the Colonials make an appearance!
It only took SEVEN freaking chapters and almost EIGHTY THOUSAND words.

11/17/2016 c7

1Bobboky
Very nice

11/1/2016 c6 nemmodo
oops reposted the last chapter.

10/24/2016 c5 Bobboky
Nice work

10/24/2016 c4 nemmodo
great story, looking forward to seeing more

10/21/2016 c4 Andrew
Enjoying the story looking forward to seeing how you merge ocean going to space faring

10/17/2016 c4 Bobboky
Very nice start.

10/4/2016 c2

4Sable Cold
It's not bad. Outside of some grammar and spelling issues, the main problem is that not a lot are familiar with Rifts. And I'm still wondering how an oceangoing ship will be able to interact meaningfully with a starship.

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