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10/2/2016 c1 3Drewman784
Hmm, okay. There's definitely some things to be worked on, grammar for one. The sentences seemed a bit run on. And the chapter length... I know you said you weren't much of a writer but the length of the chapter isn't very long and is missing a lot of stuff that could have been explained way better. I suggest getting a beta-reader or reviewing chapters before you publish them. But for a first chapter... well, I've seen worse, good luck.

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