for A Future in the Past10/23/2020 c33 Lucy Grey
I have been on top with work too and find that the last chapter I had forgotten about, so right now I will dive into a double chapter reading which was just what I needed, thanks for your update :)
I have been on top with work too and find that the last chapter I had forgotten about, so right now I will dive into a double chapter reading which was just what I needed, thanks for your update :)
10/19/2020 c33 angelintraining118
Read all of your story in one day, this is brilliant, thank you for taking the time to update. Looking forward to seeing more
Read all of your story in one day, this is brilliant, thank you for taking the time to update. Looking forward to seeing more
10/16/2020 c32 PrettyLu
Awww! I love little Bill and his infatuation with Hermione, I must accept that he almost shed a tear the moment Molly discovers Hermione's secret, by the way, Lily and James love them, I love that they are getting closer and needless to say of Sirius and his love for Mione, I love them more 3.
Awww! I love little Bill and his infatuation with Hermione, I must accept that he almost shed a tear the moment Molly discovers Hermione's secret, by the way, Lily and James love them, I love that they are getting closer and needless to say of Sirius and his love for Mione, I love them more 3.
9/25/2020 c32 S
Bill is just so cute. Wish Dumbledore would just go after the bad guys based on Hermione’s information. Yeah, I know, asking too much. He’s not a good leader. No strategy to take the bull by the horns. Just reactionary behavior. Sad really. Hope you will continue to write and complete it. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Bill is just so cute. Wish Dumbledore would just go after the bad guys based on Hermione’s information. Yeah, I know, asking too much. He’s not a good leader. No strategy to take the bull by the horns. Just reactionary behavior. Sad really. Hope you will continue to write and complete it. Thanks for writing and sharing.
9/25/2020 c23 S
I hope Hermione starts making changes soon. She should have learnt by now that Dumbledore’s decisions are not all very sound.
I hope Hermione starts making changes soon. She should have learnt by now that Dumbledore’s decisions are not all very sound.
49/25/2020 c1 S
Good start. Am looking forward to reading the rest. Would like to point you towards a couple corrections that you might want to consider in your author note right at the start. I’m not an expert either, but some things do jump out. Thanks for writing. I’m sure I will continue to comment as I read.
It is: It's the first time I try something like this.
It should be: It’s the first time I have tried something like this.
It is: so please, bare with me.
It should be: so please, bear with me.
It is: I couldn't sent him the chapter to proofread.
It should be: I couldn’t send him...
Good start. Am looking forward to reading the rest. Would like to point you towards a couple corrections that you might want to consider in your author note right at the start. I’m not an expert either, but some things do jump out. Thanks for writing. I’m sure I will continue to comment as I read.
It is: It's the first time I try something like this.
It should be: It’s the first time I have tried something like this.
It is: so please, bare with me.
It should be: so please, bear with me.
It is: I couldn't sent him the chapter to proofread.
It should be: I couldn’t send him...
8/30/2020 c31 Kitty Kat
Hey, this story should have more reviews, your way of capturing them is great, I really feel like I'm reading the canon, I love that they go slowly but surely, with the occasional stumble like Sirius but accepting his mistakes.
Keep it up!
Hey, this story should have more reviews, your way of capturing them is great, I really feel like I'm reading the canon, I love that they go slowly but surely, with the occasional stumble like Sirius but accepting his mistakes.
Keep it up!
8/27/2020 c31 PrettyLu
I loved this reconciliation, and I liked that mystery of where Hermione was and that the marauders do not know all the secrets of the castle, these two continue around each other closer and closer and I liked that Sirius is clear about how he feels about Hermione but...Will he tell you at some point? I love this cheers and looking forward to the next update, everyone stays safe. :D
I loved this reconciliation, and I liked that mystery of where Hermione was and that the marauders do not know all the secrets of the castle, these two continue around each other closer and closer and I liked that Sirius is clear about how he feels about Hermione but...Will he tell you at some point? I love this cheers and looking forward to the next update, everyone stays safe. :D
8/26/2020 c31 Lucy Grey
I quite liked these chapters, in the past I felt a bit like Hermione, sad about Sirius's attitude and also a little annoyed, but in this chapter I liked their reconciliation and how they both dance closer and closer, I love it! Impatient to know much more about this story and about these two guys who have stolen my heart.
I quite liked these chapters, in the past I felt a bit like Hermione, sad about Sirius's attitude and also a little annoyed, but in this chapter I liked their reconciliation and how they both dance closer and closer, I love it! Impatient to know much more about this story and about these two guys who have stolen my heart.
7/27/2020 c30 PrettyLu
Ay Sirius! Seriously, you portray these characters with their personalities just as they were, and I love that! Poor Hermione, I can't imagine what she must be suffering and still with the words of Sirius it broke my heart. I look forward to your next update, take care! :)
Ay Sirius! Seriously, you portray these characters with their personalities just as they were, and I love that! Poor Hermione, I can't imagine what she must be suffering and still with the words of Sirius it broke my heart. I look forward to your next update, take care! :)
7/27/2020 c30 RedSpiderLily06
I really like this story, and you are a fantastic writer. I adore how you portray the characters and i just think it’s really well done. Keep up the good work, I hope you update soon!
I really like this story, and you are a fantastic writer. I adore how you portray the characters and i just think it’s really well done. Keep up the good work, I hope you update soon!