10/6/2019 c1 GrumpyGrue
It would be a nuisance if Kasen was found with a handsome foreigner. Yukari and her old hen gossip. She's almost as bad as Aya.
It would be a nuisance if Kasen was found with a handsome foreigner. Yukari and her old hen gossip. She's almost as bad as Aya.
2/14/2019 c1 4mememechadroid 2.0
I want you to continue this story Kinda love it. This story is great
I want you to continue this story Kinda love it. This story is great
10/18/2016 c1 Dead Pann
I think my favorite part of this is that you wrote Kasen during the flashback like the average Oni: stubborn, violent, prideful of her strength, and very willing to eat humans. You wrote the God Emperor as much more patient with a "filthy Xenos" then the Imperium would be inclined to believe, which is a good thing.
One can only guess why the God Emperor decided to tame Kasen. Perhaps the God Emperor spared Kasen because she ran and could be interpreted as feeling guilty.
Even if you don't turn this into a full story, I'd like to see Kasen interact with the people George introduced her to and what one of their once-every-hundred-years meeting looks like.
I think my favorite part of this is that you wrote Kasen during the flashback like the average Oni: stubborn, violent, prideful of her strength, and very willing to eat humans. You wrote the God Emperor as much more patient with a "filthy Xenos" then the Imperium would be inclined to believe, which is a good thing.
One can only guess why the God Emperor decided to tame Kasen. Perhaps the God Emperor spared Kasen because she ran and could be interpreted as feeling guilty.
Even if you don't turn this into a full story, I'd like to see Kasen interact with the people George introduced her to and what one of their once-every-hundred-years meeting looks like.
10/5/2016 c1 Jgalue1
Please continue this story im very interested about where this is going and the interactions with Big E. Also this story has all the marking of good to excelent quality story.
Please continue this story im very interested about where this is going and the interactions with Big E. Also this story has all the marking of good to excelent quality story.