for The Resurrection Of A Hero7/29/2019 c1 cell injury
what a worst of my time. thank you for being talent-less
what a worst of my time. thank you for being talent-less
9/28/2017 c1 Unknownsoldierofthought
Lord this is edgy. don't ruin a great ship with your edge Lord crap please.
Lord this is edgy. don't ruin a great ship with your edge Lord crap please.
1/12/2017 c5 
3Yaw613
Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.
3Yaw613Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.
12/19/2016 c5 berend van den akker
cool book, hope you will update soon again. I like it a lot!
Berend
cool book, hope you will update soon again. I like it a lot!
Berend
11/19/2016 c1 HAhanichipoo
Like so far coming up on super amazing pretty fast though. I would have personally just had time go whatever pace you want in God world then no time would have passed and could have more realistically become a bamf.
Like so far coming up on super amazing pretty fast though. I would have personally just had time go whatever pace you want in God world then no time would have passed and could have more realistically become a bamf.
11/21/2016 c1 Baby Huey
In the sixth chapter you switched from 1st person to 3rd person a couple of times, you need to be careful to stay in one and not to stray to another without good reason. Also, Harry Potter fan-fic writers have latched on to the word nee (ie. Lilly Potter nee Evans). Tell me when have you EVER heard someone use this in real life? It is a very archaic word that really should only be seen in legal documents. I am not saying that you should not use the word in your stories, but you should use it where it is appropriate. That is, for example, should you include a will reading in your story, then the word would be an acceptable choice. Other than all of this nit-picky stuff, you have done an excellent job at writing a first person story. Normally I cannot stand 1st person, as it is usually not well written. But you, dear writer,have the skill and the talent to draw the reader in. To that I give you a big BZ (that is Bravo Zulu, a term used in the US military for good job).
In the sixth chapter you switched from 1st person to 3rd person a couple of times, you need to be careful to stay in one and not to stray to another without good reason. Also, Harry Potter fan-fic writers have latched on to the word nee (ie. Lilly Potter nee Evans). Tell me when have you EVER heard someone use this in real life? It is a very archaic word that really should only be seen in legal documents. I am not saying that you should not use the word in your stories, but you should use it where it is appropriate. That is, for example, should you include a will reading in your story, then the word would be an acceptable choice. Other than all of this nit-picky stuff, you have done an excellent job at writing a first person story. Normally I cannot stand 1st person, as it is usually not well written. But you, dear writer,have the skill and the talent to draw the reader in. To that I give you a big BZ (that is Bravo Zulu, a term used in the US military for good job).
11/19/2016 c4 storybook thumb
Sorry my typing got a bit screwy anyway yes to Hermione romp Ron is so wrong for her and I do like Ron but lavender was perfect for him big tits nothing between the ears him being won won was perfect YOU KNOW ITS TRUE! To my knowledge Harry is rich famous a star athlete and national hero in a castle full of horny witches not far fetching to see him get laid a lot even I get this is a Tonks fic but don't have to be now still say Hermione swipes his v card each others just because they're best friends I mean not like that wasn't the most realistic thing first girl I had sex with we were friends for two years first still friends now
Sorry my typing got a bit screwy anyway yes to Hermione romp Ron is so wrong for her and I do like Ron but lavender was perfect for him big tits nothing between the ears him being won won was perfect YOU KNOW ITS TRUE! To my knowledge Harry is rich famous a star athlete and national hero in a castle full of horny witches not far fetching to see him get laid a lot even I get this is a Tonks fic but don't have to be now still say Hermione swipes his v card each others just because they're best friends I mean not like that wasn't the most realistic thing first girl I had sex with we were friends for two years first still friends now
11/19/2016 c5 storybook thumb
Yes to romp with harmionie no to Hermione Ron ship romp with Harry make her see what a douche he is and uh who don't wanna summer fling with the delacor sisters veela are sexual ebeings right and not human gabbys a young veela not a little girl some ppl forget that and flure and the twins only acceptable weaslys. Hey Fred and George Were hot and so was Bill always said Harry should have been a pussy crusher LOL ty south park, nothing wrong with not being a virgin when he falls in love with Tonks I think he should lose it to Hermione makes sense to me
Yes to romp with harmionie no to Hermione Ron ship romp with Harry make her see what a douche he is and uh who don't wanna summer fling with the delacor sisters veela are sexual ebeings right and not human gabbys a young veela not a little girl some ppl forget that and flure and the twins only acceptable weaslys. Hey Fred and George Were hot and so was Bill always said Harry should have been a pussy crusher LOL ty south park, nothing wrong with not being a virgin when he falls in love with Tonks I think he should lose it to Hermione makes sense to me