for Bluepulse Week 20167/4/2020 c7 Guest
Given that Bart's powers make him all but immune to anaesthetic he actually does have a valid reason to fear dentists. Only another speedster could fill a cavity in before it wore off and somehow I'm doubting there was one.
Given that Bart's powers make him all but immune to anaesthetic he actually does have a valid reason to fear dentists. Only another speedster could fill a cavity in before it wore off and somehow I'm doubting there was one.
7/4/2020 c4 Guest
There's quite a few characters who would benefit from therapy, the problem is finding a therapist you feel comfortable with and for many of these Dinah probably isn't the right one. Actually more than a few of the Justice League members probably could use some trauma counselling as well.
Anyway, I really felt Jaime's annoyance at the unhelpful 'help' he was receiving. And that was unhelpful — group therapy can work but only if a) all the people at least sorta want to be there and b) half the members aren't trying keep major secrets (like their names) from the other.
Bart was barely used but OK.
There's quite a few characters who would benefit from therapy, the problem is finding a therapist you feel comfortable with and for many of these Dinah probably isn't the right one. Actually more than a few of the Justice League members probably could use some trauma counselling as well.
Anyway, I really felt Jaime's annoyance at the unhelpful 'help' he was receiving. And that was unhelpful — group therapy can work but only if a) all the people at least sorta want to be there and b) half the members aren't trying keep major secrets (like their names) from the other.
Bart was barely used but OK.
7/4/2020 c2 Guest
OK, this one I liked. You managed to capture how irritating Bart's attitude would be if he didn't have the superspeed to justify it, especially when trapped up a wall. I liked Jaime's plastic bat, I was left curious as to who the boss he'd drunkenly made out with was supposed to be, wondered how he could be studying chemistry and not know photosynthesis, and weirdly despite not recognising her characterisation I liked Cassie and her relationship with Jaime.
OK, this one I liked. You managed to capture how irritating Bart's attitude would be if he didn't have the superspeed to justify it, especially when trapped up a wall. I liked Jaime's plastic bat, I was left curious as to who the boss he'd drunkenly made out with was supposed to be, wondered how he could be studying chemistry and not know photosynthesis, and weirdly despite not recognising her characterisation I liked Cassie and her relationship with Jaime.
7/4/2020 c1 Guest
So if I'm understanding correctly Bart was losing his head and Jaime had to calm him down? That was an interesting approach to take.
Somewhere near the top it says 'maybe Gar or Beast Boy', the problem of course being that Gar is Beast Boy so that sentence makes no sense.
So if I'm understanding correctly Bart was losing his head and Jaime had to calm him down? That was an interesting approach to take.
Somewhere near the top it says 'maybe Gar or Beast Boy', the problem of course being that Gar is Beast Boy so that sentence makes no sense.
6/7/2019 c7 
16LetTheChaosEnsue
This was a fantastic set! I loved it. It was well written and the stories realistic and great.”
16LetTheChaosEnsueThis was a fantastic set! I loved it. It was well written and the stories realistic and great.”
5/29/2018 c2 8imjustshippingmywaythrulife
Oh my...oh my gosh. I did not expect that ending. Oh wow, I think I'm in shock. I'm so glad Bart was saved by the hot latino guy who didn't give up on him. Wow, that last part brought out the feels, though. But anyway, I thought all the other parts were hilarious, I really enjoyed it.
8imjustshippingmywaythrulifeOh my...oh my gosh. I did not expect that ending. Oh wow, I think I'm in shock. I'm so glad Bart was saved by the hot latino guy who didn't give up on him. Wow, that last part brought out the feels, though. But anyway, I thought all the other parts were hilarious, I really enjoyed it.
1/18/2018 c2 10lovestarr
I didn’t expect that ending but god bless. My sweet baby was saved by his latino angel
10lovestarrI didn’t expect that ending but god bless. My sweet baby was saved by his latino angel
10/9/2016 c7 creampuffs.exe
YAY! Although I loved this week you made a wonderful last chapter with plenty of fluff. It will be missed but I'll move on.
YAY! Although I loved this week you made a wonderful last chapter with plenty of fluff. It will be missed but I'll move on.
10/8/2016 c6 creampuffs.exe
For some odd reason Owen reminded me of a cat. When he first meets a person he is wary and glares at you from afar. Though later on in the night gets along with you, still wary though, and might even purr though reminds you the process could've gone quicker if you gave him wet food.
For some odd reason Owen reminded me of a cat. When he first meets a person he is wary and glares at you from afar. Though later on in the night gets along with you, still wary though, and might even purr though reminds you the process could've gone quicker if you gave him wet food.
10/7/2016 c5 starshined
Luv this story. It is soooooooooooooo good. You are a great fanfiction writer. Might I ask when the sequel to ASOM comes out? (This story is really good. I ship bluepulse a lot, and it's kinda hard to find some angsty ones.)
Luv this story. It is soooooooooooooo good. You are a great fanfiction writer. Might I ask when the sequel to ASOM comes out? (This story is really good. I ship bluepulse a lot, and it's kinda hard to find some angsty ones.)
10/5/2016 c2 OrangeCheshire
This story was great, really funny and everything I loved it, can't wait to read more!
This story was great, really funny and everything I loved it, can't wait to read more!