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11/10/2017 c14 bruz
I was so busy, no time to read
what a pleasure to read several chapters, what tension in the air during the scene after the mustard gas
it's a real pleasure to read all these changes of feelings between the characters
connor becomes even appreciable because more realistic than in the series
Thanks again for this remarkable work of rewriting
9/4/2017 c13 46ThreeMagpies
Dear Love! What a fantastic, rich and engrossing chapter. I loved seeing Bass' point of view, and the way you showed us how his feelings had changed about Charlie was just amazing, it felt just right. Well done my friend, I can't wait for more :) xx Magpie
9/3/2017 c1 eniledam05
I love the new chapter! I get so mad thinking about Rachel! I can't wait for Bass and Charlie see each other again! I also love Charlie standing up for Bass!
8/26/2017 c12 ThreeMagpies
Hey there Love! Another fantastic chapter:) you wove canon and new perspectives together so very well - I was absolutely riveted to what was happening and it felt absolutely right the way you told it, can't wait for more! Xx Magpie
8/26/2017 c11 ThreeMagpies
Hi Love, another fabulous chapter! I really enjoyed reading the extra layers, loved seeing more of Charlie and Connor's perspective and revisiting these intense scenes with new eyes... I love the pace and rhythm- well done my friend :) xx Magpie
8/23/2017 c11 2KelseyNicole08
I really hope you pick this up again. I love it!
8/14/2017 c10 46ThreeMagpies
Hi Love, what a fantastic chapter! I love the way it flows from Charlie with Bass, you make their closeness so vivid, so real (that shared look) to Miles and Connor, all so worried about the others, not able to bear the possibility of what might have happened...then the relief when they find each other! Well done my friend, I loved it! Can't wait for more of this great story :) xx Magpie
8/12/2017 c1 eniledam05
I love the original story! But this new version is amazing! Seeing a new chapter today was like Christmas morning for me!
6/11/2017 c9 AshleyStewart09
So good.
6/3/2017 c9 bruz
These additions are very interesting compared to the first version
The characters gain in depth
4/29/2017 c9 eniledam05
I love how you wrote the Connor and Miles scene. The memories as Connor was a kid with his uncle Miles. I also love how good Charlie is for Bass and how good he is for her. Your an amazing writer! I can't wait for more!
4/29/2017 c9 ThreeMagpies
Hi Love! What a wonderful chapter my friend, I love your insights into these intense scenes, and your word pictures of the intensity of the emotions felt by some of our favorite characters, well done :D and that last line is just perfect! Xx Magpie
1/31/2017 c8 bruz
thank for this re-write, this is a beautiful strory
1/24/2017 c8 AshleyStewart09
This so very good! An happy New year to you too .
1/24/2017 c7 AshleyStewart09
This was so good.
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