for Bittersuite: 1941 - I'll Be Home for Christmas You Can Count on Me…10/5/2022 c1 
79tallsunshine12
The feeling of being torn between two worlds and two decisions that Hogan has right then is so strong, it's colored his judgement and given rise to anger at his best friend. Well-told in all respects. I can hear the music and feel the bone-numbing chill of this fall evening.
79tallsunshine12The feeling of being torn between two worlds and two decisions that Hogan has right then is so strong, it's colored his judgement and given rise to anger at his best friend. Well-told in all respects. I can hear the music and feel the bone-numbing chill of this fall evening.
3/20/2017 c1 37generalsleepy
I really appreciate your attention to detail. It adds to the richness and immediacy of the setting.
37generalsleepyI really appreciate your attention to detail. It adds to the richness and immediacy of the setting.
2/22/2017 c1 New Gaia
It's hard to think seriously about Hogan's Heroes, but this is a really interesting preamble to the series, and I appreciate the references to Dad's Army and goodnight Sweetheart, both topnotch British series.
Perhaps the more sober underpinnings of this comedy series make the satirical historical comedy even sharper!
It's hard to think seriously about Hogan's Heroes, but this is a really interesting preamble to the series, and I appreciate the references to Dad's Army and goodnight Sweetheart, both topnotch British series.
Perhaps the more sober underpinnings of this comedy series make the satirical historical comedy even sharper!
1/10/2017 c1 87snooky-9093
Having studied abroad in London in 1981 and visiting in May in 1985, and dealing with their weather, I got a nice chuckle over Hogan's sentiments in the beginning of the story. The beautiful description of the OC seems to be out of a BBC presentation. This is a unique work. Hogan's background is different, and I love his interaction with the other characters. Roberts has been one of my favorite "extras" (I've used him more than once, myself) and your portrayal of him is on point.
87snooky-9093Having studied abroad in London in 1981 and visiting in May in 1985, and dealing with their weather, I got a nice chuckle over Hogan's sentiments in the beginning of the story. The beautiful description of the OC seems to be out of a BBC presentation. This is a unique work. Hogan's background is different, and I love his interaction with the other characters. Roberts has been one of my favorite "extras" (I've used him more than once, myself) and your portrayal of him is on point.
10/10/2016 c1 12Jinzle
Your an excellent writer. The story was tight, and it flowed well. I look forward to your next entry.
12JinzleYour an excellent writer. The story was tight, and it flowed well. I look forward to your next entry.
10/10/2016 c1 momgobloo
A very nice snippet of Hogan with the RAF and a great job capturing the time. Poor Hogan won't make it home for awhile! Welcome to the fandom!
A very nice snippet of Hogan with the RAF and a great job capturing the time. Poor Hogan won't make it home for awhile! Welcome to the fandom!
10/10/2016 c1 40Abracadebra
Welcome to the HH fandom. I really enjoyed this beautifully constructed piece. Your writing is crisp and vivid - you transported this reader right into 1941. I also thought you moved very skillfully between Hogan's internal musings and his engagement with other characters. I like your take on Hogan's service before the US entry into the war, and the snippets of his history that you provide are intriguing. I'd love to know more about what he needed to straighten out in his life. I hope this is the first of many contributions!
40AbracadebraWelcome to the HH fandom. I really enjoyed this beautifully constructed piece. Your writing is crisp and vivid - you transported this reader right into 1941. I also thought you moved very skillfully between Hogan's internal musings and his engagement with other characters. I like your take on Hogan's service before the US entry into the war, and the snippets of his history that you provide are intriguing. I'd love to know more about what he needed to straighten out in his life. I hope this is the first of many contributions!
10/9/2016 c1 WaterDeep
This was a thought and mood provoking work. I enjoyed reading it.
Thanks for sharing it.
This was a thought and mood provoking work. I enjoyed reading it.
Thanks for sharing it.