9/4/2018 c1 Transformium
it is indeed well made though you should add more complex words to describe how they feel and you should fix your grammar

7/26/2017 c1 4Kc4229
Not bad, I like the battle scared Jaune(if I can manage to sleep that is, I tried 3 times to get his name right). Went a tad fast but I like it brings it is a one shot. Good work!

10/17/2016 c1 goddy80119
good end
always nice ;_;