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2/5/2003 c2 9neosun7
Wow! That all happened kind of sudden! Oh well! Teams from Russia, Australia, Japan, and Canada too! Cool idea! Can't wait until the next chapter! Bye now!

-Neosun7

PS- All of your story is smashed into one or two paragraphs. If you press return twice between each paragraph, it won't smash together. Bye again!
2/5/2003 c2 Wallington M. Simpson Jr
This is little more than an outline! You jump from a historic moment(four KND teams joining forces) to just having them materialize in the DCfDtL's headquarters and into a confrontation. You have to add more dialogue and detail.
2/4/2003 c1 199Usami
Hey, that was too short! Please write more!

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