for Like Grains of Sand in the Hourglass4/2/2024 c12 Ilana Vitoria
Estou amando a fic, ela é muito envolvente e confesso que você arrasou ao juntar Ron e Luna, é uma combinação surpreendente que deu super certo, estou ansiosa para os próximos capítulos.
Estou amando a fic, ela é muito envolvente e confesso que você arrasou ao juntar Ron e Luna, é uma combinação surpreendente que deu super certo, estou ansiosa para os próximos capítulos.
3/29/2024 c4 MRGwrites
it's peek ... something, when one is worried about demeaning a race of fantasy creatures. i suppose you're a card carrying member of spew?
it's peek ... something, when one is worried about demeaning a race of fantasy creatures. i suppose you're a card carrying member of spew?
1/27/2024 c5 Abstract01
Can't help but cheer aloud that the characters have grown a spine against the harridan and the manipulator.
Thanks for the alternate character development in this story!
Can't help but cheer aloud that the characters have grown a spine against the harridan and the manipulator.
Thanks for the alternate character development in this story!
1/9/2024 c4 Daggerxxx
Lord, leave Dumbledore alone! Dora's condemnation of him reaches the point of absurdity. No general will tell each of his soldiers all the information. This is pointless and harmful. Dumbledore was looking for horcruxes, relying on secrecy, and this is absolutely justified. If Voldemort had found out about these searches and hidden at least one Horcrux, everything would have been over.
In Dora, or in you, the author speaks of a touchy teenager, but not an adult who understands the concept of forced secrecy and trust (read subordination) to his commanders. In canon, the Order of the Phoenix believed in Dumbledore, and as it turned out, it was not in vain.
The fact that Dora stopped trusting only because she saw several deaths and was offended by the hidden information only makes her an extremely unreliable person who can ruin the whole case.
In fact, it would be even interesting to read this. In the end, with good intentions...
Lord, leave Dumbledore alone! Dora's condemnation of him reaches the point of absurdity. No general will tell each of his soldiers all the information. This is pointless and harmful. Dumbledore was looking for horcruxes, relying on secrecy, and this is absolutely justified. If Voldemort had found out about these searches and hidden at least one Horcrux, everything would have been over.
In Dora, or in you, the author speaks of a touchy teenager, but not an adult who understands the concept of forced secrecy and trust (read subordination) to his commanders. In canon, the Order of the Phoenix believed in Dumbledore, and as it turned out, it was not in vain.
The fact that Dora stopped trusting only because she saw several deaths and was offended by the hidden information only makes her an extremely unreliable person who can ruin the whole case.
In fact, it would be even interesting to read this. In the end, with good intentions...
1/8/2024 c1 Daggerxxx
Ah yes, the good old cliché with the all-knowing Luna. Why people spoil this rather sweet and tragic character with all sorts of superpowers is absolutely incomprehensible to me. -10 points for that.
Ah yes, the good old cliché with the all-knowing Luna. Why people spoil this rather sweet and tragic character with all sorts of superpowers is absolutely incomprehensible to me. -10 points for that.
12/22/2023 c12 WhatHaveIDiscovered
Really enjoyed this Tonks time travel story. Im looking forward to the continued story. Well done and thanks for sharing!
Really enjoyed this Tonks time travel story. Im looking forward to the continued story. Well done and thanks for sharing!
12/8/2023 c12 
8Wally991
Yes! I really hoped for a Hermione/Harry/Tonks ending. She's just too awesome (in this fic) to be left out of the main pairing. If you ended up pairing her with anyone else, it would feel too much as a cop out
8Wally991Yes! I really hoped for a Hermione/Harry/Tonks ending. She's just too awesome (in this fic) to be left out of the main pairing. If you ended up pairing her with anyone else, it would feel too much as a cop out
11/28/2023 c4 Olegreyowl
Concerning your comments about the Goblin language. You're absolutely correct and yet I think in the context it's also correct to use the name when it's a wizard POV. The wizarding world is rife with bias. And even the people who are the "good" guys may not recognize their own bias. Would the Goblins themselves refer to their language thus? Absolutely no, but you can guarantee that Witches and Wizards do and have been for centuries. The word "squaw" comes to mind for the rl reference.
Concerning your comments about the Goblin language. You're absolutely correct and yet I think in the context it's also correct to use the name when it's a wizard POV. The wizarding world is rife with bias. And even the people who are the "good" guys may not recognize their own bias. Would the Goblins themselves refer to their language thus? Absolutely no, but you can guarantee that Witches and Wizards do and have been for centuries. The word "squaw" comes to mind for the rl reference.
11/11/2023 c10 maiqsmail
Meh. What a clisterfuck. Potter is the worst person in the story, I started to sympathise with Snape on this one. So many possibilities to make things right yet instead they ran into the fray like headless chickens.
Meh. What a clisterfuck. Potter is the worst person in the story, I started to sympathise with Snape on this one. So many possibilities to make things right yet instead they ran into the fray like headless chickens.
11/11/2023 c9 maiqsmail
I do realize it's built on canon shitpile, yet couldn't they fucking sent Patronuses to bigwigs all over? Well at least they're using the floo instead of a fucking flying horses.
I do realize it's built on canon shitpile, yet couldn't they fucking sent Patronuses to bigwigs all over? Well at least they're using the floo instead of a fucking flying horses.
11/9/2023 c1 maiqsmail
What a half cocked scheme. The security in Hogwarts is severely leaving as usual.
What a half cocked scheme. The security in Hogwarts is severely leaving as usual.