for Routine Maintenance10/16/2016 c1 Guest
Good first chapter! :) There's mistakes here and there, and you need to space more at certain points, but good start!
Also, please remember to add Character Tags on!
Good first chapter! :) There's mistakes here and there, and you need to space more at certain points, but good start!
Also, please remember to add Character Tags on!
10/16/2016 c1 
36Rangergirl3
I loved this! I really, really liked how you had all the characters interact, and it's always refreshing to see Hunk feature in a chapter or a story. I am really, really looking forward to reading more! :D Great job! Thanks for writing! :D
36Rangergirl3I loved this! I really, really liked how you had all the characters interact, and it's always refreshing to see Hunk feature in a chapter or a story. I am really, really looking forward to reading more! :D Great job! Thanks for writing! :D