for Overheard5/24/2020 c6 Guest
I always believed that it took way to long for Kate to tell Castle that she loved him and didn't like that it happened as basically a dying goodbye
I always believed that it took way to long for Kate to tell Castle that she loved him and didn't like that it happened as basically a dying goodbye
11/3/2017 c2 malleys8
Yea! My first comment written to the first chapter requested a full completion of the story started. That because so many of your stories are one chapter (no complaint - you get much more said and done in that single chapter than I can in pages), I assumed it was a singlet waiting for you to publish
the next short story, which may or may not continue the first chapter. Then, I realized all I needed to do was push "Next."I'm still happily on board for this story.
Yea! My first comment written to the first chapter requested a full completion of the story started. That because so many of your stories are one chapter (no complaint - you get much more said and done in that single chapter than I can in pages), I assumed it was a singlet waiting for you to publish
the next short story, which may or may not continue the first chapter. Then, I realized all I needed to do was push "Next."I'm still happily on board for this story.
11/2/2017 c1 malleys8
Wow, heavy! Understandably, there are times when unpleasant or disagreeable facts must be acknowledged - this, certainly would be one of them. However, as you've proven on numerous occasions in your stories, you once again presented the situation and conversations in a very palatable manner, so that even when it makes the reader uncomfortable in an empathetic manner; they're still too interested to quit before ending. That being said, I DO hope you've written a continuation to completion for our Caskett couple. If so, I'll find it through my readings.
Wow, heavy! Understandably, there are times when unpleasant or disagreeable facts must be acknowledged - this, certainly would be one of them. However, as you've proven on numerous occasions in your stories, you once again presented the situation and conversations in a very palatable manner, so that even when it makes the reader uncomfortable in an empathetic manner; they're still too interested to quit before ending. That being said, I DO hope you've written a continuation to completion for our Caskett couple. If so, I'll find it through my readings.
8/8/2017 c6 
1spilleritz1
I realise that is about a thousand years too late, but I quite enjoyed the take you put on Kate trying to give Castle up and let him go...I never thought of it like that, thank you.
1spilleritz1I realise that is about a thousand years too late, but I quite enjoyed the take you put on Kate trying to give Castle up and let him go...I never thought of it like that, thank you.
4/16/2017 c10 Tercay
Such an awesome storyline. You have my full attention. Great dialogue and keeping themin character are strong components of your work. Thank you.
-Terry
Such an awesome storyline. You have my full attention. Great dialogue and keeping themin character are strong components of your work. Thank you.
-Terry
3/19/2017 c13 14Perspex13
You know from my last review that I'm all about hope, and this chapter provided even more! I especially liked the bit about "Of course for the better!" It also seems true to form that Castle might not be able to wait, his excitement leading to an accelerated question for Beckett. Interesting place to end, too, with the reference to sharing their news with Alexis. Depending on how privy she was to the early developments in this story, she might have some mixed emotions about the development!
14Perspex13You know from my last review that I'm all about hope, and this chapter provided even more! I especially liked the bit about "Of course for the better!" It also seems true to form that Castle might not be able to wait, his excitement leading to an accelerated question for Beckett. Interesting place to end, too, with the reference to sharing their news with Alexis. Depending on how privy she was to the early developments in this story, she might have some mixed emotions about the development!
3/19/2017 c12 Perspex13
I very much enjoyed this conversation. I hope they recorded it, though! They've got years of bad habits to overcome. Revelations and epiphanies are great, let's just hope that they don't slide back into the bad habits that led to the communication problems in the first place. But there's hope!
I very much enjoyed this conversation. I hope they recorded it, though! They've got years of bad habits to overcome. Revelations and epiphanies are great, let's just hope that they don't slide back into the bad habits that led to the communication problems in the first place. But there's hope!
3/19/2017 c11 Perspex13
Wow, that letter must've nearly killed Kate. A lot of thought went into it, and a considerable amount of reflection, acceptance, and apology. That third paragraph in particular should've had Castle on his heels.
I like that they didn't just jump into things after that. There's been too much build up, too much history, for a simple resolution to their difficulties.
Wow, that letter must've nearly killed Kate. A lot of thought went into it, and a considerable amount of reflection, acceptance, and apology. That third paragraph in particular should've had Castle on his heels.
I like that they didn't just jump into things after that. There's been too much build up, too much history, for a simple resolution to their difficulties.
3/16/2017 c13 Tercay
I loved it, You are right It would still be on the air if you wrote the storyline! Thank you for sharing.
-Terry
I loved it, You are right It would still be on the air if you wrote the storyline! Thank you for sharing.
-Terry
3/16/2017 c6 Guest
Wow! This story is so intense and so true to character. I can"t wait to read more. The Yolanda character was a stroke of genius.
-Terry
Wow! This story is so intense and so true to character. I can"t wait to read more. The Yolanda character was a stroke of genius.
-Terry
3/14/2017 c11 sasans
I am so glad that not only did Rick receive Kate's heartfelt letter but he read it and came back. I look forward to more.
I am so glad that not only did Rick receive Kate's heartfelt letter but he read it and came back. I look forward to more.