
11/8/2016 c1
45Gotaru
Totally falled in love with Ed's last words.
Owww, why they have to be SO cute? ;_;
Great story! n.n

Totally falled in love with Ed's last words.
Owww, why they have to be SO cute? ;_;
Great story! n.n
10/19/2016 c1
22we.can.fly.away.to.Gallifrey
Awwwwww...that is so sweet! A young Al would believe everything his brother told him! I can imagine them remembering this when they are older...actually I can imagine Al still thinking that the lightening is still Sky Alchemists until it came up again when they were older (i.e. when Ed's got automail and Al's in the armour)...that would make a brilliant and hilarious shot

Awwwwww...that is so sweet! A young Al would believe everything his brother told him! I can imagine them remembering this when they are older...actually I can imagine Al still thinking that the lightening is still Sky Alchemists until it came up again when they were older (i.e. when Ed's got automail and Al's in the armour)...that would make a brilliant and hilarious shot
10/18/2016 c1
4TheRoseAlchemist17
Aww! This story was adorable! I did notice one spelling mistake ("is" instead of "it" in the second-to-last paragraph), but other than that, this is amazing! :)

Aww! This story was adorable! I did notice one spelling mistake ("is" instead of "it" in the second-to-last paragraph), but other than that, this is amazing! :)