for Rise of the Sarutobi Clan7/3/2019 c1 elixirmaster
1st chapter is bomb, idk why there's so much angst elsewhere but this, this gets my hope up.
1st chapter is bomb, idk why there's so much angst elsewhere but this, this gets my hope up.
5/31/2019 c19 Guest
went shit
went shit
5/30/2019 c24 Night-Stryder
I tried believe me I really wanted to like the changes but it’s not changes I like I will continue to wish you success as you write well and I’m sure others enjoy you’re story but I can’t continue reading this I’m sorry good luck
I tried believe me I really wanted to like the changes but it’s not changes I like I will continue to wish you success as you write well and I’m sure others enjoy you’re story but I can’t continue reading this I’m sorry good luck
5/30/2019 c21 Night-Stryder
I liked every chapter up to this one this one I disliked I don’t like the addition of Kuroko his team is also pretty poor and adding others to the generation of miracles doesn’t really make much sense the only difference to the academy students seem to be they get their heads messed with to compare them to kids who’ve reached high jounin level seems like it’s just to stroke others pride I’ll still read on cause I’ve enjoyed the other chapters but Kuroko is annoying and Shino is boring
I liked every chapter up to this one this one I disliked I don’t like the addition of Kuroko his team is also pretty poor and adding others to the generation of miracles doesn’t really make much sense the only difference to the academy students seem to be they get their heads messed with to compare them to kids who’ve reached high jounin level seems like it’s just to stroke others pride I’ll still read on cause I’ve enjoyed the other chapters but Kuroko is annoying and Shino is boring
5/27/2019 c25 NazgulBelserion
I love this mc I really do and I know this is a AU just hope you stick to Naruto timeline and not so much filler cause the problem is you'll keep adding more and more crap and you'll lose your fire and drop the novel unlike if it was just normal Naruto timeline like the whole kise and all that crap I'm not much a fan of honestly but I can see where your coming from still not my cup of tea but since I enjoy the read before all the crap was added in I'll give it a shot
I love this mc I really do and I know this is a AU just hope you stick to Naruto timeline and not so much filler cause the problem is you'll keep adding more and more crap and you'll lose your fire and drop the novel unlike if it was just normal Naruto timeline like the whole kise and all that crap I'm not much a fan of honestly but I can see where your coming from still not my cup of tea but since I enjoy the read before all the crap was added in I'll give it a shot
5/26/2019 c2 Guest
Dante is not a japanise name!
Dante is not a japanise name!
5/13/2019 c13 Guest
Dantes parings are ass none of them are bad b*tches
Dantes parings are ass none of them are bad b*tches
5/3/2019 c4 Prime Prodigy
Seriously, what sort of Japanese name is ‘Dante’? Sounds like a bad Italian comedy of a baby trying to have a stiff on. This plot is miserable.
Seriously, what sort of Japanese name is ‘Dante’? Sounds like a bad Italian comedy of a baby trying to have a stiff on. This plot is miserable.
4/28/2019 c6 Guest
Yes
Yes
4/25/2019 c1 
2Dango and Tea
Trying to pleasure your own mother through disguised "feeding"? Talk about disgusting.
2Dango and TeaTrying to pleasure your own mother through disguised "feeding"? Talk about disgusting.
4/9/2019 c25 1setokayba2n
- Are they going to try Iryojutsu? With how fine is their chakra control, they could do it. Also, they saved Karin (that dissapeared after that) they could had visited the land of waves... Naruto in the end did not learn the Kage Bunshin? And what happened to Mizuki?
From chapter 23 I'm surprised Dante did not learn a way to cheat poker.
In chapter 24... How did a simple hyuuga learn to make seals like what they used? I was thinking they were only thinking that the Byakugan and the gentle first is the only thing they need. Not to say seals like that should be something that only Jiraiya could do.
Also, my vote for Gaara is Tayuya, need someone as crazy as him to maintain him aware.
1setokayba2n- Are they going to try Iryojutsu? With how fine is their chakra control, they could do it. Also, they saved Karin (that dissapeared after that) they could had visited the land of waves... Naruto in the end did not learn the Kage Bunshin? And what happened to Mizuki?
From chapter 23 I'm surprised Dante did not learn a way to cheat poker.
In chapter 24... How did a simple hyuuga learn to make seals like what they used? I was thinking they were only thinking that the Byakugan and the gentle first is the only thing they need. Not to say seals like that should be something that only Jiraiya could do.
Also, my vote for Gaara is Tayuya, need someone as crazy as him to maintain him aware.