for Rise of the Sarutobi Clan4/7/2019 c2 The51st
Sumimasen, NANI DESU KA!? really author-san really? Dante? dfq u doing using western names in a oriental centric world? just kinda breaks the immersion you know.
Sumimasen, NANI DESU KA!? really author-san really? Dante? dfq u doing using western names in a oriental centric world? just kinda breaks the immersion you know.
4/5/2019 c25 silvernecroguy
gods is this a great story, i like the fact that your trying not to completely focus on the three and trying to involve others.
gods is this a great story, i like the fact that your trying not to completely focus on the three and trying to involve others.
4/4/2019 c25 Guest
Garra x Fuu
Garra x Fuu
4/3/2019 c25 Devang98
I thought this was droped but your sudden update surprised me . Keep up the good work
I thought this was droped but your sudden update surprised me . Keep up the good work
4/2/2019 c1 Guest
Readers, meet Sasuke 2.0 He's less emo but just as if not even more full of himself... before even being born.
Readers, meet Sasuke 2.0 He's less emo but just as if not even more full of himself... before even being born.
4/2/2019 c25 
2Ittehgaps
I love the dynamic you've built up between Sasuke, Dante, and Naruto. They make me laugh every time they appear, without fail.
I'm looking forward to seeing what tortu...training Izumi puts the Mini's through. It will be VERY entertaining to read. ):)
Now, with the information of the Daiymo's heir having a thumb in the Konoha pie, I wonder who will be more backstabby and betray the other first, the Konoha shadow council and Ninja or the Heir. And Yugao said it perfectly, 'well Capital ready or not here we come'. The capital, the 'King's Landing' of Naruto. Where masked, two-faced people speak sweet and sour, hollow words with their silver, forked tongues. And you can use that line if you want. :) Looking forward to seeing the "Chaos trio" making a tsunami in politics.
Also is the line about the Heir having a 'string' in Konoha a reference to my 'So many red threads, so little time' comment or is it just a coincidence?
2IttehgapsI love the dynamic you've built up between Sasuke, Dante, and Naruto. They make me laugh every time they appear, without fail.
I'm looking forward to seeing what tortu...training Izumi puts the Mini's through. It will be VERY entertaining to read. ):)
Now, with the information of the Daiymo's heir having a thumb in the Konoha pie, I wonder who will be more backstabby and betray the other first, the Konoha shadow council and Ninja or the Heir. And Yugao said it perfectly, 'well Capital ready or not here we come'. The capital, the 'King's Landing' of Naruto. Where masked, two-faced people speak sweet and sour, hollow words with their silver, forked tongues. And you can use that line if you want. :) Looking forward to seeing the "Chaos trio" making a tsunami in politics.
Also is the line about the Heir having a 'string' in Konoha a reference to my 'So many red threads, so little time' comment or is it just a coincidence?
3/2/2019 c6 1DarkPacifist
So far...while I wouldn't put this in my toplist... I've read more fics than what is remotely healthy for a mortal. This is showing to be a well thought out story so far and your OC isn't too bad, I would bemoan the lack of interaction with the extended cast but this is still pre-cannon so no rush. I look forward to catching up on this and will probably check out your other works.
1DarkPacifistSo far...while I wouldn't put this in my toplist... I've read more fics than what is remotely healthy for a mortal. This is showing to be a well thought out story so far and your OC isn't too bad, I would bemoan the lack of interaction with the extended cast but this is still pre-cannon so no rush. I look forward to catching up on this and will probably check out your other works.