for The Strange Awarness10/28/2016 c1 
24JJAndrews
Well, this seems like a pretty interesting story so far. I like Kaina, she seems to be a good character and I'll keep reading it.
24JJAndrewsWell, this seems like a pretty interesting story so far. I like Kaina, she seems to be a good character and I'll keep reading it.
10/27/2016 c2 9LilactheDryad
Not only did I read this in the wrong order, it took me much MUCH longer than it should have to recognize the name 'Thranduil'. I feel so stupid!
9LilactheDryadNot only did I read this in the wrong order, it took me much MUCH longer than it should have to recognize the name 'Thranduil'. I feel so stupid!
10/26/2016 c2 14Dont Treat on ME 2982
Does she still have her light saber it will be hard getting a new one in middle earth Good Introduction and will there be a future Legolas Romance
14Dont Treat on ME 2982Does she still have her light saber it will be hard getting a new one in middle earth Good Introduction and will there be a future Legolas Romance
10/26/2016 c2 1Dovahdad
Don't apologize! ;-) Ahh - much clearer visuals this time. Nicely done! Small things here and there, but these things will come with time and experience. For example: "... made his way away from the small glade." where "... made his way from..." would perhaps have been more correct. Other than that, a very nice continuation of your introductory chapter!
I must say, I was not expecting Thranduil to find her. I am doubly curious now regarding where you are headed with this! Well done, and I hope you continue.
1DovahdadDon't apologize! ;-) Ahh - much clearer visuals this time. Nicely done! Small things here and there, but these things will come with time and experience. For example: "... made his way away from the small glade." where "... made his way from..." would perhaps have been more correct. Other than that, a very nice continuation of your introductory chapter!
I must say, I was not expecting Thranduil to find her. I am doubly curious now regarding where you are headed with this! Well done, and I hope you continue.
10/24/2016 c1 Dovahdad
Hi! I read your LOTR work and despite my initial misgivings, I was quickly hooked. I have always been a sucker for the devotion and love between a father and daughter. Onto this work - your writing has improved and matured, well done. This chapter came across as a bit hurried in the end, but it was still well executed. Always be aware that your readers may not be as informed in the lore of your world as you are, you may have to elaborate a tiny bit more. I also had difficulties "picturing" your environment. This may just be a personal preference, but I like to "see" a full picture when I read - was the wind whipping hair and cloaks about, was it cold or dark, glass crunching underfoot; little details, you know? Other than that - this is a fresh concept and so far you have done it justice. Plan carefully if you have not done so already. I am certainly very curious about where this is headed!
Hi! I read your LOTR work and despite my initial misgivings, I was quickly hooked. I have always been a sucker for the devotion and love between a father and daughter. Onto this work - your writing has improved and matured, well done. This chapter came across as a bit hurried in the end, but it was still well executed. Always be aware that your readers may not be as informed in the lore of your world as you are, you may have to elaborate a tiny bit more. I also had difficulties "picturing" your environment. This may just be a personal preference, but I like to "see" a full picture when I read - was the wind whipping hair and cloaks about, was it cold or dark, glass crunching underfoot; little details, you know? Other than that - this is a fresh concept and so far you have done it justice. Plan carefully if you have not done so already. I am certainly very curious about where this is headed!