for RWBY: 4 Knights of Remnant8/28/2017 c3 Guest
First things first, good to see this fic is alive, was a little worried their for a bit when we didn't see any update for a while. Second, you have no idea how refreshing it is for their to be a fic about an entire team of OCs that doesn't focus to much on one character or have all the OCs instantly click together like they were all made for each other and start working perfectly in sync as the ultimate badasses of badasses, I'm not saying I need for them to spend the first few chapters at each other's throats, but sweet merciful lord it's at the point where the simple act of them arguing about something not directly related to the plot or their character arcs like normal human beings is something I'm praising like it's the second coming (it's well written, funny, and does much to humanize the characters early on and is therefore worthy of praise but you get my point right) if this is just a case of me picking all the bad apples out of the barrel when it come to RWBY fics (non-crossovers) please feel free to correct me. Third, does Ao not know about the idea of giving someone aura to someone else, even if he never directly researched it, wouldn't be at least know of the theory, or is this just a case of him not believing in the metaphysical concept of a "soul"/that research being so classified even he doesn't know about it? Fourth, anyone else imagine Polybius with the voice of crimson dragon from the Yugioh abridged movie or is that just me? Fifth, this fic is great, hope to see it update sooon.
First things first, good to see this fic is alive, was a little worried their for a bit when we didn't see any update for a while. Second, you have no idea how refreshing it is for their to be a fic about an entire team of OCs that doesn't focus to much on one character or have all the OCs instantly click together like they were all made for each other and start working perfectly in sync as the ultimate badasses of badasses, I'm not saying I need for them to spend the first few chapters at each other's throats, but sweet merciful lord it's at the point where the simple act of them arguing about something not directly related to the plot or their character arcs like normal human beings is something I'm praising like it's the second coming (it's well written, funny, and does much to humanize the characters early on and is therefore worthy of praise but you get my point right) if this is just a case of me picking all the bad apples out of the barrel when it come to RWBY fics (non-crossovers) please feel free to correct me. Third, does Ao not know about the idea of giving someone aura to someone else, even if he never directly researched it, wouldn't be at least know of the theory, or is this just a case of him not believing in the metaphysical concept of a "soul"/that research being so classified even he doesn't know about it? Fourth, anyone else imagine Polybius with the voice of crimson dragon from the Yugioh abridged movie or is that just me? Fifth, this fic is great, hope to see it update sooon.
1010/23/2016 c2 Dark Guise of The Sun
Ok, ok...
THIS GOOD WRITING! It sounds good already since the first chapter and it all flows along very smoothly.
P.S.
Your story has some similarities with mine. It's not copying though I haven't published mine yet.
Anyways, Besides that, Keep writing! I love your writing!
Ok, ok...
THIS GOOD WRITING! It sounds good already since the first chapter and it all flows along very smoothly.
P.S.
Your story has some similarities with mine. It's not copying though I haven't published mine yet.
Anyways, Besides that, Keep writing! I love your writing!