
10/26/2016 c1
4TheRoseAlchemist17
Nice little story! I liked it a lot! :)
One thing I have to point out, though (actually, two): "a river of read (I'm guessing you meant red)" and "golden brain(I'm guessing you meant braid?)." Sorry if I'm being rude! I just wanted to let you know in case they were mistakes.

Nice little story! I liked it a lot! :)
One thing I have to point out, though (actually, two): "a river of read (I'm guessing you meant red)" and "golden brain(I'm guessing you meant braid?)." Sorry if I'm being rude! I just wanted to let you know in case they were mistakes.